These are comments in the vicinity of changes as I've skimmed chapters and haven't followed the examples using Base ( https://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Documentation/DocumentationTeamInfo/ProducingLibreOfficeUserGuides#What_to_look_for_in_an_update_or_review ).
It's good to see the document tone updated. * BG7305-Queries_SF_12Jan2022.odt - I note most of the figures used are not referenced in the text. - What is the capitalisation guide for figure text? - Paragraph after Figure 11 - *That* is normally a redundant word - Figure 17 Count... prefer *shows* (used extensively in guides) alternatively *calculates* - Figure 19 - delete unexpectedly - The paragraph under Figure 36 end of first sentence... as Figure 36 shows. - Other changes read well * BG7306-Reports_SF_14Jan2022.odt - Changes read well -- To unsubscribe e-mail to: [email protected] Problems? https://www.libreoffice.org/get-help/mailing-lists/how-to-unsubscribe/ Posting guidelines + more: https://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette List archive: https://listarchives.libreoffice.org/global/documentation/ Privacy Policy: https://www.documentfoundation.org/privacy
