I see no advantage to all those extra words. J On Wed, 24 Jun 2020 at 20:29 Peter Schofield <[email protected]> wrote:
> Hello Jean > > Item 3 in you recommendations. > > How about changing to style Text Body and doing the following > > To this edition of the (insert custom field of guide name) > To previous editions of the (insert custom field of guide name) > > Just tried it and looks OK. > > Regards > Peter Schofield > [email protected] > > > > > On 24 Jun 2020, at 12:03, Jean Weber <[email protected]> wrote: > > > > Changes needed or recommended: > > 1) Remove the colon (:) after Note on the copyright page. > > 2) I don't think the line "This book is adapted and updated from > > [Guide Name] OpenOffice.org 3.3" is needed any more. I have been > > removing that line from the Writer Guide and some other books. > > 3) I would change the "To this edition" and "To previous editions" > > headings to something that is not going to show up in the TOC. > > 4) Why is the Published [date] line in italics? I would make it normal > > Roman font. > > 5) Remove "a" from "Using LibreOffice on a macOS" heading on page 5. > > 6) Having the section "Using LibreOffice on macOS" on p5 makes it look > > like that should be on the first page of every chapter, but it should > > instead be on the Copyright page. > > 7) Serif font is more difficult to read on screen than sans-serif, so > > I would return the body text and other styles to Liberation Sans. > > 8) I have now seen the heading colours for the different books and (as > > discussed in a different thread) I think we should not use different > > colours. Also, if different colours were to be used, I think the > > underline (border) colour should match the font colour. > > 9) I made some changes to the explanations in the template while I was > > working on the Contributors' Guide. I recommend they be incorporated > > here, or at least given serious consideration. I thought I had > > uploaded my draft LOv7 template several weeks ago, but I can't find > > it, so I've now done so. Here is the link: > > https://nextcloud.documentfoundation.org/s/yLJCPaqqoTSzGz3 > > > > Jean > > > > -- > > To unsubscribe e-mail to: > [email protected] > > Problems? > https://www.libreoffice.org/get-help/mailing-lists/how-to-unsubscribe/ > > Posting guidelines + more: > https://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette > > List archive: https://listarchives.libreoffice.org/global/documentation/ > > Privacy Policy: https://www.documentfoundation.org/privacy > > -- To unsubscribe e-mail to: [email protected] Problems? https://www.libreoffice.org/get-help/mailing-lists/how-to-unsubscribe/ Posting guidelines + more: https://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette List archive: https://listarchives.libreoffice.org/global/documentation/ Privacy Policy: https://www.documentfoundation.org/privacy
