Hello Jean

Item 3 in you recommendations.

How about changing to style Text Body and doing the following

To this edition of the (insert custom field of guide name)
To previous editions of the (insert custom field of guide name)

Just tried it and looks OK.

Regards
Peter Schofield
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> On 24 Jun 2020, at 12:03, Jean Weber <[email protected]> wrote:
> 
> Changes needed or recommended:
> 1) Remove the colon (:) after Note on the copyright page.
> 2) I don't think the line "This book is adapted and updated from
> [Guide Name] OpenOffice.org 3.3" is needed any more. I have been
> removing that line from the Writer Guide and some other books.
> 3) I would change the "To this edition" and "To previous editions"
> headings to something that is not going to show up in the TOC.
> 4) Why is the Published [date] line in italics? I would make it normal
> Roman font.
> 5) Remove "a" from "Using LibreOffice on a macOS" heading on page 5.
> 6) Having the section "Using LibreOffice on macOS" on p5 makes it look
> like that should be on the first page of every chapter, but it should
> instead be on the Copyright page.
> 7) Serif font is more difficult to read on screen than sans-serif, so
> I would return the body text and other styles to Liberation Sans.
> 8) I have now seen the heading colours for the different books and (as
> discussed in a different thread) I think we should not use different
> colours. Also, if different colours were to be used, I think the
> underline (border) colour should match the font colour.
> 9) I made some changes to the explanations in the template while I was
> working on the Contributors' Guide. I recommend they be incorporated
> here, or at least given serious consideration. I thought I had
> uploaded my draft LOv7 template several weeks ago, but I can't find
> it, so I've now done so. Here is the link:
> https://nextcloud.documentfoundation.org/s/yLJCPaqqoTSzGz3
> 
> Jean
> 
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