Hello, After reading version 06 of draft-huque-dnsop-multi-alg-rules-06 I have a few small remarks.
section 2. Proposed Updates to RFCs In the last paragraph of this section, the algorithms 8 and 13 are mentioned and it might be useful to add a reference to what these numbers mean. (for example https://www.iana.org/assignments/dns-sec-alg-numbers/dns-sec-alg-numbers.xhtml#dns-sec-alg-numbers-1 ) section 2.2. Signer Requirements I think it would be helpful when there is some text to explain what is shown in table 1, or at least reference the table. section 4. Example Scenarios "various scenariosin practice" -> "various scenarios in practice" (adding a space) section 5. IANA Considerations "new row is added an the column remains" -> "new row is added and the column remains" (s/an/and/) section A.2. Validator Requirements "either validated data (AD=1) or RCODE=2 (SERVFAIL)" -> "either authentic data (AD=1) or SERVFAIL (RCODE=2)" According to RFC4035 section 3, the AD bit stands for Authentic Data. Has this changed somewhere? And I think it is more uniform to have the bits between (), so the last part becomes "SERVFAIL (RCODE=2)" I hope my remarks can make the document a bit better. P.S. I also added a comment to the github repo, but that was already resolved by Peter -- Stefan Ubbink DNS & Systems Engineer Present: Mon, Tue, Wed, Fri SIDN | Meander 501 | 6825 MD | ARNHEM | The Netherlands T +31 (0)26 352 55 00 https://www.sidn.nl
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