Moin, Pulling this to the front as it is mostly editorial while I am thinking about the other discussion.
> I had already read the 02 version of the document and didn't have any > remarks. With this new version I looked at the diff between 02 and 04 > [1] and noticed that "namespace" was replaced with "name space". In > alinea 3 of section "3. Name Space Fragmentation" the word > "namespace" > was added, but without the space, so I would think the space should > be > added here as well. This is also the case in section "4.1. Guidelines > for Authoritative DNS Server Configuration" . Ack; Unified. > In section "4. Policy Based Avoidance of Name Space Fragmentation" I > believe there is a typo "comaprably" -> "comparably". Ack. > The last bullet point of "4.1. Guidelines for Authoritative DNS > Server > Configuration" has "when when" where I think only "when" would be > enough and Ack. > I wonder if it should say "or" instead of "and" in "DNS resolution > via IPv4-only and IPv6-only networks. I think it should be and, but also added a 'respectively' at the end of the sentence; That should resolve the weirdness. > The reference to RFC6877 for XLAT in section "4.2. Guidelines for DNS > Resolvers" could be moved to a earlier mention of XLAT in section > "3.2 Network Conditions Causing IP Version Related Name Space > Fragmentation" > And the same is true for PREF64 [RFC6146]. Ack! Thanks for the input! Integrated and pushed. With best regards, Tobias -- Dr.-Ing. Tobias Fiebig T +31 616 80 98 99 M [email protected] Pronouns: he/him/his _______________________________________________ DNSOP mailing list -- [email protected] To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected]
