On Mon, 11 Aug 2025 11:45:29 +0200 Tobias Fiebig <[email protected]> wrote:
> Moin, Hello Tobias, > > just submitted a new version with the changes based on feedback > received so far (with Mark's points still being open while we > discuss). > > As before, some more thorough reads of the document would be > appreciated. I had already read the 02 version of the document and didn't have any remarks. With this new version I looked at the diff between 02 and 04 [1] and noticed that "namespace" was replaced with "name space". In alinea 3 of section "3. Name Space Fragmentation" the word "namespace" was added, but without the space, so I would think the space should be added here as well. This is also the case in section "4.1. Guidelines for Authoritative DNS Server Configuration" . In section "4. Policy Based Avoidance of Name Space Fragmentation" I believe there is a typo "comaprably" -> "comparably". The last bullet point of "4.1. Guidelines for Authoritative DNS Server Configuration" has "when when" where I think only "when" would be enough and I wonder if it should say "or" instead of "and" in "DNS resolution via IPv4-only and IPv6-only networks. The reference to RFC6877 for XLAT in section "4.2. Guidelines for DNS Resolvers" could be moved to a earlier mention of XLAT in section "3.2 Network Conditions Causing IP Version Related Name Space Fragmentation" And the same is true for PREF64 [RFC6146]. I hope this helps. [1] https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url1=draft-ietf-dnsop-3901bis-02&url2=draft-ietf-dnsop-3901bis-04&difftype=--html -- Stefan Ubbink DNS & Systems Engineer Present: Mon, Tue, Wed, Fri SIDN | Meander 501 | 6825 MD | ARNHEM | The Netherlands T +31 (0)26 352 55 00 https://www.sidn.nl
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