On 14-May-07, 19:35 (CDT), Ron Johnson <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: 
> On 05/14/07 17:23, Wilfried Goesgens wrote:
> >   Description     : Citadel.org is an highly integrated Groupware Platform 
> > with a Web 2.0 enabled Webinterface, but also providing SMTP, IMAP, POP3 
> > and GroupDAV access to its content.
> 
> You don't need to put "Citadel.org" in the short description.  And
> the short description should be limited to 50(?) characters.

Also, there's no need to capitalize "Groupware Platform", "Webinterface" should
be "web interface."

> > Citadel offers Versatile email services with verry low administration 
> > needed. It provides its own implementations of these server protocols:
> > Imap, Pop3, SMTP, ManageSieve, Citadel

Versatile => versatile
verry => very
Imap => IMAP
Pop3 => POP3

(Yes, small nit-picky changes.)

Thanks,
Steve


-- 
Steve Greenland
    The irony is that Bill Gates claims to be making a stable operating
    system and Linus Torvalds claims to be trying to take over the
    world.       -- seen on the net


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