Christian PERRIER wrote:
> Erik's proposal:
>
> Description: Tool to log your sport activities
> Pytrainer is a tool to log all your sport excursion coming from GPS
> devices, including:
> * Garmin ForeRunnner 205, 305 and 405.
> * other devices that generate GPX files.
>
> My proposal:
>
> Description: sport activities logging software
All package synopses are about "software", so "tool" is better; and
you don't need to swerve so hard to avoid second person:
Description: tool for logging sport activities
> This package provides a tool to log sport activities (such as
> running, biking, etc.) with data originating from GPS
> devices, including:
> * Garmin ForeRunnner 205, 305 and 405;
> * other devices that generate GPX files.
* Saying that you log the activities "with" data gets a bit unclear.
* The general term "sports activities" has already been used in the
synopsis, so here you can go straight to the specific cases.
* Two bulletpoints isn't enough to justify making it a list.
* Surprisingly the Forerunner isn't in camelcase.
So:
Description: tool for logging sport activities
This package provides a logging tool for runners, cyclists, etc. It
uses data from GPS-enabled devices that generate GPX files, such as
the Garmin Forerunnner 205/305/405.
--
JBR with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian
sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package
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