> While translating the file lessdisks, I encountered the following  
> typos, which I thought you might like to eliminate in a future release.

thanks.  i've incorporated a few of these changes upstream- specifics
below.

> _________________
> 1.
> po:4
> auto: ???     Type: boolean
> auto: ???     Description
> reference:    ???     ../lessdisks-xterminal.templates.master:4
> Original:     ???0    
> Is this computer where the root filesystem is stored the same as the one
> providing X11 applications for the Lessdisks terminals?
> 
> (This would be more natural with parentheses:
> 
> "Is this computer (where the root filesystem is stored) the same as  
> the one
> providing X11 applications for the Lessdisks terminals?"

incorporated upstream.
 
> 2.
> po:10
> auto: ???     Type: boolean
> auto: ???     Description
> reference:    ???     ../lessdisks-xterminal.templates.master:23
> Original:     ???0    
> Should it be attempted to auto-configure X11 on non-customized  
> terminals?
> 
> (More natural English:
> 
> "Try to auto-configure X11 on non-customized terminals?"

i incorporated this upstream, with a slight change:

"Attempt to auto-configure X11 on uncustomized terminals?"

> 3.
> po:12
> auto: ???     Type: string
> auto: ???     Description
> reference:    ???     ../lessdisks-xterminal.templates.master:32
> Original:     ???0    Please enter command used to probe and 
> auto-configure  X11.
> 
> (This also applies to strings master:49, 63.
> 
> Since you have already talked about this command, you should use the  
> word "the". Using "the" is a way of saying "this word" or "that  
> word": effectively, "the word I just mentioned, you know which one I  
> mean".
> 
> "Please enter the command used to probe and to auto-configure X11."

this i simplified upstream:

"Please enter the command used to auto-configure X11."

> 4.
> po:14
> auto: ???     Type: string
> auto: ???     Description
> reference:    ???     ../lessdisks-xterminal.templates.master:37
> Original:     ???0    Please list options passed to the X11 auto- 
> configuration command.
> 
> (This also applies to strings: master:56, 70, 4, 10, 160, 169, 177,  
> 202, 213.
> 
> We don't know anything about these options yet: you haven't talked  
> about them. We don't know how many there will be. Therefore:
> 
> "Please list any options..."
> 
> This allows for a situation where any number of options could be  
> used, including zero.)

i don't really see what "please list any" adds over "please list". both
can include the possibility of no options or arguments.
 
> 5.
> po:70
> auto: ???     Type: string
> auto: ???     Description
> reference:    ???     ../lessdisks.templates.master:134
> Original:     ???0    
> Methods known to work with Lessdisks (make sure to install needed  
> package(s)
> on the Lessdisks root filesystem):\n
>  thy (preferred for sarge)\n
>  thttpd (preferred for woody)\n
>  khttpd
> 
> ("Make sure you install any necessary packages". This, as I said  
> before, covers the possibilies of any number, including zero.)

again, i don't see what adding "any" adds. (upstream, this question has
been changed significantly).

live well,
  vagrant

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