Guillem Jover wrote:
> On Sun, 2008-06-01 at 20:57:15 +0100, Justin B Rye wrote:
>> Description: Debian package management system
>> This package provides the low-level infrastructure for handling the
>> installation and removal of Debian software packages.
>> .
>> For Debian package development tools, install dpkg-dev.
>
> Thanks, this seems better. While checking I've updated the ones for
> dpkg-dev and dselect, but I'm not a native speaker, so could you review
> those as well? I'm attaching my changes here.
Sure, just one typo that I can see:
> Package: dselect
[...]
> -Description: user tool to manage Debian packages
[...]
> +Description: Debian package mangament user tool
^^^^^^^^^
management
I think once I'm nitpicking that line I'd also drop the "user"
there, since it's not clear whether it means:
* user as opposed to developer (irrelevant)
* user as opposed to superuser (misleading)
* user as opposed to system process (implicit in the word "tool")
So:
Description: Debian package management tool
or conceivably:
Description: Debian package management front-end
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