Christian Perrier wrote:
> +#flag:translate!:3
>  _Description: Commit changed files in /etc to git?
> - etckeeper has detected that /etc contains uncommitted files
> - or other changes. It's best to have everything in /etc committed
> - to git before running apt. etckeeper can add any new files listed below,
> - and commit all the changed files for you.
> + The /etc directory contains uncommitted files
> + or other changes. All files in /etc should be committed
> + to git before running APT. The following files may be added
> + automatically now:

There are a couple of problems with this change:

- It makes it seem more important that files in /etc be committed than
  it really is. The worst that can result from them not being committed
  is them being committed with unrelated changes later. That's why I
  used the "it's best.." wording.
- It's not accurate to say that the git-status output shows files that may
  be added. It might show such files, it might show files that will be
  removed, or renamed, or whatever. etckeeper will only handle adding
  new files and committing changed files, which is why I was careful to
  say just that.

> -_Description: git commit failed
> - etckeeper failed to commit changes in /etc using git.
> - You may want to resolve the uncommitted changes by hand before continuing.
> +_Description: Commit failed
> + An attempt to commit /etc changes to git failed.
> + .
> + You should manually resolve the issues with the uncommitted changes
> + before continuing.

Again since at worst a commit failure can only lead to some more changes
stacking up with the current uncommitted ones, resolving it is a "may",
and not a "should".

> -Description: store /etc in git
> +Description: tool to keep /etc changes in git

I am fond of my nice simple "store /etc in git", and I don't feel that
it's a sentence fragement of the sort that it makes sense to reword.
My description is not saying "[implicit package name here] storeS /etc 
in git". It's saying that if you want to store /etc in git, you've found
the right package to do that.

> + The etckeeper program is a collection of tools to let /etc be stored in a 
> git

Is it a program, or is it a collection of tools?

Anyway, there's only one /usr/bin program involved, so "collection of
tools" is wrong.

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