On 24 de marzo de 2015 02:18:01 GMT+01:00, Paul Wise <p...@debian.org> wrote:
>On Tue, Mar 24, 2015 at 5:50 AM, Laura Arjona Reina wrote:
>
>> I'm attaching a patch with the new paragraph about HP.
>
>I found the wording confusing, as it is missing "has provided".
>
>I'd also replace "HP hardware donations" with "current HP hardware
>donations".
>
>Please also indent the second paragraph as it was before.
>
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Thanks for reviewing. I'll attach a second patch soon.
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