On 2014-09-13 23:20, Dmitry Smirnov wrote:
On Sat, 13 Sep 2014 13:57:36 Filipus Klutiero wrote:
Thanks. There is an issue left in "into logicalone (teamdev)||". The noun
phrase is missing a determiner. This could read "into a single logical
one", but "logical one" is at best unclear. I'd suggest "into a single
virtual NIC".
Thanks, I hope it is better now:
http://anonscm.debian.org/cgit/collab-maint/libteam.git/diff/?id=aa5e280ba53d84d9eb547c0060abada42abb523d
It is, thank you. I notice an issue in the following sentence:
|
This is already implemented in the Linux kernel by the bonding driver but
unlike bonding driver libteam (user space) have the following additional
features|
The noun phrase "bonding driver" is missing a determiner such as "the" (this could read
"unlike the bonding driver").
Also, I would recommend adding a comma after that.
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Filipus Klutiero
http://www.philippecloutier.com
