Package: bumprace
Version: 1.5.4-1
Severity: minor
Tags: patch

The man page and the program itself contain several spelling/grammar
mistakes. The attached patch fixes those I found. (Btw. it would be
nice to have the SGML source of the man page as well).

--- bumprace.c.orig     2011-12-26 15:40:21.000000000 +0100
+++ bumprace.c  2014-05-29 16:00:30.000000000 +0200
@@ -884,9 +884,9 @@
     puts("  [-f | --fullscreen]         start in fullscreen mode (default)");
     puts("  [-w,| --windowed]           start in windowed mode");
     puts("  [-s,| --nosound]            start without sound");
-    puts("  [-n,| --notfinal]           no title screen (nice for 
develolopers)");
-    puts("  [-t,| --noparticles]        turns of paticles. good for slow 
computers.");
-    puts("  [-o,| --nofadeout]          no fadeout after crash (for slow 
coputers)");
+    puts("  [-n,| --notfinal]           no title screen (nice for 
developers)");
+    puts("  [-t,| --noparticles]        turns of particles, good for slow 
computers.");
+    puts("  [-o,| --nofadeout]          no fadeout after crash (for slow 
computers)");
     puts("  [     --precision]         sets the precison of the collisions 
(default=10)");
     puts("  [-h,| --help]               this text\n");
     
@@ -1205,7 +1205,7 @@
         else break;
       }
     }
-    printf("** Racer selcted **\n");
+    printf("** Racer selected **\n");
     for (pl=0;pl<playernum;pl++) load_racer();  
     printf("** Racer data loaded **\n");
     // set racer abilities


--- bumprace.6.orig     2012-05-15 00:09:24.000000000 +0200
+++ bumprace.6  2014-05-29 15:56:00.000000000 +0200
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@
 \fBbumprace\fR a simple arcade game. 
 .SH "OPTIONS" 
 .PP 
-These programs follow the usual GNU command line syntax, 
+This program follows the usual GNU command line syntax, 
 with long options starting with two dashes (`\-').  A summary of 
 options is included below. 
 .IP "\fB-f\fP           \fB\-\-fullscreen\fP         " 10 
@@ -24,13 +24,13 @@
 .IP "\fB-w\fP           \fB\-\-windowed\fP         " 10 
 Start in windowed mode. 
 .IP "\fB-s\fP           \fB\-\-nosound\fP         " 10 
-Start in without sound. 
+Start without sound. 
 .IP "\fB-n\fP           \fB\-\-notfinal\fP         " 10 
-No title screen (nice for develolopers). 
+No title screen (nice for developers). 
 .IP "\fB-t\fP           \fB\-\-noparticles\fP         " 10 
-Turns of paticles. Good for slow computers. 
+Turns off particles. Good for slow computers. 
 .IP "\fB-o\fP           \fB\-\-nofadeout\fP         " 10 
-No fadeout after crash (for slow coputers). 
+No fadeout after crash (for slow computers). 
 .IP "          \fB\-\-precision\fP         " 10 
 Sets the precison of the collisions (default=10). 
 .IP "\fB-h\fP           \fB\-\-help\fP         " 10 
-- System Information:
Debian Release: 7.5
  APT prefers stable
  APT policy: (500, 'stable')
Architecture: amd64 (x86_64)

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