* Ian Jackson (ijack...@chiark.greenend.org.uk) [140221 13:29]:
> Andreas Barth writes ("Bug#727708: init system coupling etc."):
> > So I propose to change the text:
> > >
> > > The Technical Committee offers no advice at this time on requirements
> > > or package dependencies on specific init systems after the jessie
> > > release. There are too many variables at this point to know what the
> > > correct course of action will be.
> >
> > to
> > | The Technical Committee offers no advice regarding sysvinit
> > | compatibility at this time after the jessie release. There are too
> > | many variables at this point to know what the correct course of action
> > | will be.
> >
> > (the empty line above is there by purpose, i.e. it also merges this
> > paragraph with the previous one)
>
> I will transpose this into git.
>
> As an observation from a native English speaker, the language is
> rather odd. It is not conventional to have two time clauses next to
> each other like that. I would suggest (but do not formally propose):
>
> The Technical Committee offers no advice at this time regarding
> sysvinit compatibility after the jessie release. There are too
> many variables at this point to know what the correct course of
> action will be.
>
> Ie, move "at this time" to after "advice".
Thanks, accepted.
Andi
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