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--- nagvis.old/debian/nagvis.templates 2012-05-28 12:45:46.629478836 +0200
+++ nagvis/debian/nagvis.templates 2012-05-28 15:00:24.207976389 +0200
@@ -2,21 +2,20 @@
Type: select
Default: icinga
Choices: icinga, nagios, other
-_Description: For which monitoring suite should NagVis be configured?
- This NagVis package supports the monitoring suites Icinga as well as
- well as Nagios using the check-mk-live broker backend. please choose the,
- respective entry.
+_Description: Monitoring suite used with NagVis:
+ The NagVis package supports Icinga as well as
+ Nagios, using the check-mk-live broker backend.
.
If you would like to use NagVis with a different backend or a different
- monitoring suite, please choose "other". You'll have to configure it
+ monitoring suite, please choose "other". You'll have to configure it
manually.
Don't use interrogative form for multiselect template.
Drop double space.
Template: nagvis/delete_on_purge
Type: boolean
Default: false
-_Description: Should the user created NagVis data be removed?
- During usage NagVis creates some file in /var/cache/nagvis and and
- /etc/nagvis (e.g. background images and map files), including a small
- database for authentification. If you don't need any of these files,
+_Description: Delete NagVis data when purging the package?
+ NagVis creates files in /var/cache/nagvis and
+ /etc/nagvis (for instance background images and map files), including a small
+ database for authentification. If you don't need any of these files,
they can be removed now, or you may want to keep them and clean up by hand
later.
Change synopsis wording and just talk about "NagVis data".
Slightly rewrite las paragraph.
--- nagvis.old/debian/control 2012-05-28 12:45:46.629478836 +0200
+++ nagvis/debian/control 2012-05-28 14:59:08.253956977 +0200
@@ -13,36 +13,36 @@
Architecture: all
Depends: ${misc:Depends}, php5-common (>= 5.3.0), libapache2-mod-php5,
php5-gd, ucf, graphviz, php5-sqlite, php-net-socket, php-gettext,
check-mk-livestatus
Suggests: nagvis-demos
-Description: Visualization addon for Nagios or Icinga
- NagVis can be used to visualize Nagios or Icinga Data, e.g. to display IT
- processes like a mail system or a network infrastructure.
+Description: visualization addon for Nagios or Icinga
+ NagVis can be used to visualize Nagios or Icinga data, for instance to
display IT
+ processes like a mail system or a network infrastructure.
.
- Key features are:
+ Its key features are:
.
- * Display of single Hosts or Services
- * Display the state of a Host dependent on the state of its services
- ("recognize services")
- * Visualization of Host- or Servicegroups with one icon
- * Define Sub-Map icons wich represent a complete NagVis Map of
- Hosts/Services/Groups in one icon (drill down)
- * Visualization of complete IT Processes using self drawn graphics
+ * Display of single hosts or services;
+ * Display the state of a host dependent on the state of its services
+ ("recognize services");
+ * Visualization of Host- or Servicegroups with one icon;
+ * Define Sub-Map icons wich represent a complete NagVis map of
+ hosts/services/groups in one icon (drill down);
+ * Visualization of complete IT Processes using self drawn graphics.
Package: nagvis-demos
Architecture: all
Depends: ${misc:Depends}, nagvis (= ${source:Version})
-Description: Demo Mapgs for NagVis
- NagVis can be used to visualize Nagios or Icinga Data, e.g. to display IT
- processes like a mail system or a network infrastructure.
+Description: demo Mapgs for NagVis
+ NagVis can be used to visualize Nagios or Icinga data, for instance to
display IT
+ processes like a mail system or a network infrastructure.
.
- Key features are:
+ Its key features are:
.
- * Display of single Hosts or Services
- * Display the state of a Host dependent on the state of its services
- ("recognize services")
- * Visualization of Host- or Servicegroups with one icon
- * Define Sub-Map icons wich represent a complete NagVis Map of
- Hosts/Services/Groups in one icon (drill down)
- * Visualization of complete IT Processes using self drawn graphics
+ * Display of single hosts or services;
+ * Display the state of a host dependent on the state of its services
+ ("recognize services");
+ * Visualization of Host- or Servicegroups with one icon;
+ * Define Sub-Map icons wich represent a complete NagVis map of
+ hosts/services/groups in one icon (drill down);
+ * Visualization of complete IT Processes using self drawn graphics.
.
- This package contains some demonstration maps.
+ This package provides some demonstration maps.
--
Template: nagvis/monitoring_system Type: select Default: icinga Choices: icinga, nagios, other _Description: Monitoring suite used with NagVis: The NagVis package supports Icinga as well as Nagios, using the check-mk-live broker backend. . If you would like to use NagVis with a different backend or a different monitoring suite, please choose "other". You'll have to configure it manually. Template: nagvis/delete_on_purge Type: boolean Default: false _Description: Delete NagVis data when purging the package? NagVis creates files in /var/cache/nagvis and /etc/nagvis (for instance background images and map files), including a small database for authentification. If you don't need any of these files, they can be removed now, or you may want to keep them and clean up by hand later.
--- nagvis.old/debian/nagvis.templates 2012-05-28 12:45:46.629478836 +0200
+++ nagvis/debian/nagvis.templates 2012-05-28 15:00:24.207976389 +0200
@@ -2,21 +2,20 @@
Type: select
Default: icinga
Choices: icinga, nagios, other
-_Description: For which monitoring suite should NagVis be configured?
- This NagVis package supports the monitoring suites Icinga as well as
- well as Nagios using the check-mk-live broker backend. please choose the,
- respective entry.
+_Description: Monitoring suite used with NagVis:
+ The NagVis package supports Icinga as well as
+ Nagios, using the check-mk-live broker backend.
.
If you would like to use NagVis with a different backend or a different
- monitoring suite, please choose "other". You'll have to configure it
+ monitoring suite, please choose "other". You'll have to configure it
manually.
Template: nagvis/delete_on_purge
Type: boolean
Default: false
-_Description: Should the user created NagVis data be removed?
- During usage NagVis creates some file in /var/cache/nagvis and and
- /etc/nagvis (e.g. background images and map files), including a small
- database for authentification. If you don't need any of these files,
+_Description: Delete NagVis data when purging the package?
+ NagVis creates files in /var/cache/nagvis and
+ /etc/nagvis (for instance background images and map files), including a small
+ database for authentification. If you don't need any of these files,
they can be removed now, or you may want to keep them and clean up by hand
later.
--- nagvis.old/debian/control 2012-05-28 12:45:46.629478836 +0200
+++ nagvis/debian/control 2012-05-28 14:59:08.253956977 +0200
@@ -13,36 +13,36 @@
Architecture: all
Depends: ${misc:Depends}, php5-common (>= 5.3.0), libapache2-mod-php5,
php5-gd, ucf, graphviz, php5-sqlite, php-net-socket, php-gettext,
check-mk-livestatus
Suggests: nagvis-demos
-Description: Visualization addon for Nagios or Icinga
- NagVis can be used to visualize Nagios or Icinga Data, e.g. to display IT
- processes like a mail system or a network infrastructure.
+Description: visualization addon for Nagios or Icinga
+ NagVis can be used to visualize Nagios or Icinga data, for instance to
display IT
+ processes like a mail system or a network infrastructure.
.
- Key features are:
+ Its key features are:
.
- * Display of single Hosts or Services
- * Display the state of a Host dependent on the state of its services
- ("recognize services")
- * Visualization of Host- or Servicegroups with one icon
- * Define Sub-Map icons wich represent a complete NagVis Map of
- Hosts/Services/Groups in one icon (drill down)
- * Visualization of complete IT Processes using self drawn graphics
+ * Display of single hosts or services;
+ * Display the state of a host dependent on the state of its services
+ ("recognize services");
+ * Visualization of Host- or Servicegroups with one icon;
+ * Define Sub-Map icons wich represent a complete NagVis map of
+ hosts/services/groups in one icon (drill down);
+ * Visualization of complete IT Processes using self drawn graphics.
Package: nagvis-demos
Architecture: all
Depends: ${misc:Depends}, nagvis (= ${source:Version})
-Description: Demo Mapgs for NagVis
- NagVis can be used to visualize Nagios or Icinga Data, e.g. to display IT
- processes like a mail system or a network infrastructure.
+Description: demo Mapgs for NagVis
+ NagVis can be used to visualize Nagios or Icinga data, for instance to
display IT
+ processes like a mail system or a network infrastructure.
.
- Key features are:
+ Its key features are:
.
- * Display of single Hosts or Services
- * Display the state of a Host dependent on the state of its services
- ("recognize services")
- * Visualization of Host- or Servicegroups with one icon
- * Define Sub-Map icons wich represent a complete NagVis Map of
- Hosts/Services/Groups in one icon (drill down)
- * Visualization of complete IT Processes using self drawn graphics
+ * Display of single hosts or services;
+ * Display the state of a host dependent on the state of its services
+ ("recognize services");
+ * Visualization of Host- or Servicegroups with one icon;
+ * Define Sub-Map icons wich represent a complete NagVis map of
+ hosts/services/groups in one icon (drill down);
+ * Visualization of complete IT Processes using self drawn graphics.
.
- This package contains some demonstration maps.
+ This package provides some demonstration maps.
Source: nagvis Section: net Priority: extra Maintainer: Debian Nagios Maintainer Group <pkg-nagios-de...@lists.alioth.debian.org> Uploaders: Jan Wagner <w...@cyconet.org>, Alexander Wirt <formo...@debian.org>, Alexander Reichle-Schmehl <toli...@debian.org> Build-Depends: debhelper (>= 7.0.50~), quilt, po-debconf Standards-Version: 3.9.3 Homepage: http://www.nagvis.org Vcs-Svn: svn://svn.debian.org/svn/pkg-nagios/nagvis/trunk/ Vcs-Browser: http://svn.debian.org/wsvn/pkg-nagios/nagvis/trunk/ Package: nagvis Architecture: all Depends: ${misc:Depends}, php5-common (>= 5.3.0), libapache2-mod-php5, php5-gd, ucf, graphviz, php5-sqlite, php-net-socket, php-gettext, check-mk-livestatus Suggests: nagvis-demos Description: visualization addon for Nagios or Icinga NagVis can be used to visualize Nagios or Icinga data, for instance to display IT processes like a mail system or a network infrastructure. . Its key features are: . * Display of single hosts or services; * Display the state of a host dependent on the state of its services ("recognize services"); * Visualization of Host- or Servicegroups with one icon; * Define Sub-Map icons wich represent a complete NagVis map of hosts/services/groups in one icon (drill down); * Visualization of complete IT Processes using self drawn graphics. Package: nagvis-demos Architecture: all Depends: ${misc:Depends}, nagvis (= ${source:Version}) Description: demo Mapgs for NagVis NagVis can be used to visualize Nagios or Icinga data, for instance to display IT processes like a mail system or a network infrastructure. . Its key features are: . * Display of single hosts or services; * Display the state of a host dependent on the state of its services ("recognize services"); * Visualization of Host- or Servicegroups with one icon; * Define Sub-Map icons wich represent a complete NagVis map of hosts/services/groups in one icon (drill down); * Visualization of complete IT Processes using self drawn graphics. . This package provides some demonstration maps.
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