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diff --git a/doc/publican/sources/Foreword.xml b/doc/publican/sources/Foreword.xml index eeb16cc..e6875a3 100644 --- a/doc/publican/sources/Foreword.xml +++ b/doc/publican/sources/Foreword.xml @@ -9,15 +9,14 @@ <title>Preface</title> <para> - This document concerns the (i) Wayland architecture, (ii) Wayland model of - operation and (iii) its library API. Wayland protocol specification is shown - also in the Appendix. The document here is aimed at Wayland developers and - who is looking for information how to program with it, but it is not meant - primarily for applications developers. + This document describes the (i) Wayland architecture, (ii) Wayland model of + operation and (iii) its library API. Also, the Wayland protocol specification is shown + in the Appendix. This document is aimed primarily at Wayland developers and + those looking to program with it; it does not cover application development. </para> <para> - There have been many contributors to this document and, while this is the - first edition only, many errors are expected to be found. We appreciate + There have been many contributors to this document and since this is only the + first edition many errors are expected to be found. We appreciate corrections. </para> <literallayout> -- 1.7.9.5 _______________________________________________ wayland-devel mailing list [email protected] http://lists.freedesktop.org/mailman/listinfo/wayland-devel
