Public bug reported:

Open the software-center and search sauerbraten 
Click on the 'More Info' button
There needs to be some commas in the first sentence. For example, "Sauerbraten 
is a networked, fast-paced, 3D, first-person shooter game."
Also, in my opinion, the word 'rather' is not needed in the second sentence. 
In the second sentence the letter 'a' should not be before the word 'some'.

ProblemType: Bug
DistroRelease: Ubuntu 11.10
Package: sauerbraten 0.0.20100728.dfsg+repack-3
ProcVersionSignature: Ubuntu 3.0.0-11.18-generic 3.0.4
Uname: Linux 3.0.0-11-generic i686
ApportVersion: 1.23-0ubuntu1
Architecture: i386
Date: Sat Sep 24 20:56:27 2011
ProcEnviron:
 PATH=(custom, no user)
 LANG=en_US.UTF-8
 SHELL=/bin/bash
SourcePackage: sauerbraten
UpgradeStatus: No upgrade log present (probably fresh install)

** Affects: sauerbraten (Ubuntu)
     Importance: Undecided
         Status: New


** Tags: apport-bug i386 oneiric patch

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