I've used nstenz's patch with some of Jay's suggestions. I agree with the comma and semicolon changes. I put periods on the ends of all the user visible statements; I tend to agree they look like they need them. I chose to say 'several minutes' instead of 'few minutes' since fsck's can sometimes take a significant amount of time.
I think there is a good point made that 'disk drive' seems jargonish, but 'disk' and 'drive' have non-computer meanings that I could imagine being confused ("What; has my computer turned into a chiropractor?") I've opted to leave that change out and retain 'disk drive' for now; it could use further discussion in a new bug report, though. -- You received this bug notification because you are a member of Ubuntu Bugs, which is subscribed to Ubuntu. https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/572016 Title: Disk check message is grammatically incorrect -- ubuntu-bugs mailing list ubuntu-bugs@lists.ubuntu.com https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-bugs