I've used nstenz's patch with some of Jay's suggestions.  I agree with
the comma and semicolon changes.  I put periods on the ends of all the
user visible statements; I tend to agree they look like they need them.
I chose to say 'several minutes' instead of 'few minutes' since fsck's
can sometimes take a significant amount of time.

I think there is a good point made that 'disk drive' seems jargonish,
but 'disk' and 'drive' have non-computer meanings that I could imagine
being confused ("What; has my computer turned into a chiropractor?")
I've opted to leave that change out and retain 'disk drive' for now; it
could use further discussion in a new bug report, though.

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  Disk check message is grammatically incorrect

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