Oh, thanks for the branch! I made a spin on that which shortens the text (since the slide - and my head - couldn't fit it all). I reduced the links by a level each to make them easier to remember. I joined community and commercial support into a single bullet point.
On another note, a Google search reveals that there are 917,000 pages with the exact phrase "open and vibrant." (I think this justifies my hatred of that phrase as an unbelievably meaningless cliché, applied to everything from Initech to the moon). I pondered changing it to "friendly and diverse," but 1,200,000 pages had the same idea. In the end, I just changed it to "friendly", which I think makes the point just fine. Feel free to suggest others, too :) I'm also using this as the main base for some little formatting changes, a tweak to the Welcome section and to maybe jam in-line images in place of text descriptions of icons. (As discussed on the mailing list). Feedback is invited. One problem: "There is also commercial support available through Canonical, its partners and approved companies" ...Can we make that sentence shorter? ** Branch linked: lp:~ubiquity-slideshow/ubiquity-slideshow- ubuntu/429874-tweaks -- documentation.html does not introduce documentation or any support options except ubuntuforums https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/429874 You received this bug notification because you are a member of Ubuntu Bugs, which is subscribed to Ubuntu. -- ubuntu-bugs mailing list ubuntu-bugs@lists.ubuntu.com https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-bugs
