Dylan and all, Taking Dylan's comments into consideration, I've put together a new mockup that is basically his design, with only slight modifications. Feel free to check it out at http://ubuntuwtf.wordpress.com/2009/06/21/my-second-mockup-suggestion-for-ubiquity-slideshow/
* I've removed the border from the 'smiley' slide, (which, to me seemed unnecessary), and repositioned it, accordingly. I think the border made it look 'boxed in' and 'cookie cutter'. * You're already familiar with my subtle changes to the text, in my attempt to use language that is more personable. I would be happy to go through the text of all the sides and recommend any textural changes, if that would be welcomed. * The URLs are now just bolded blue links within the paragraph of text. * The top margin is similar to my previous design, with the accent colour changed slightly to fit. (By the way, the "4 of 12" page count is centred on the icon below it.) * I've increased the slide's height slightly, because I felt I needed to do so in order to give more whitespace for the title. The dimensions are now 700 x 460. On Thu, Jun 18, 2009 at 2:26 PM, H S <[email protected]> wrote: > After some discussion with Dylan at > https://lists.ubuntu.com/archives/ubuntu-doc/2009-June/013257.html, I > decided to put together a mockup of what I think the slides could look > like. Talking with Dylan, we decided this mailing list would be a good > place to make it known. > > So, please, I invite you to visit my mockup at > http://ubuntuwtf.wordpress.com/2009/06/18/my-mockup-suggestion-for-ubiquity-slideshow/ > I would have tried to put it up on the Launchpad page, but forgive me, I > found Launchpad far too confusing of a noob like me. In any case, I look > forward to hearing your comments and suggestions. I put no small amount of > time and love into creating this mockup, so please don't be shy. I am very > interested to know what you think. > > Thanks, > > Howard "Freeman" Stellar. >
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