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*Mar*Below is *an edited and refined version* of your text—aimed at
clarity, flow, and coherence, while preserving your voice, intensity, and
philosophical stance. After that, I’ll share *my own reflections* on the
ideas you raise.
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Edited and Improved Version

*Listening, Attention, and Response*

In free and healthy nature, listening, attention, and response arise
organically. Nature listens, attends, and responds—and so do you. You
listen to nature, reflexively attend to it, and respond in return.
Attention and response form a symbiosis that becomes the foundational
feature of flora, fauna, and geography alike. The biosphere itself becomes
a great college, with every organism a student. Your self-consciousness
dissolves into the wider consciousness of nature, the self expanding beyond
the individual.

Even today, despite immense pollution, every organism continues—futilely—to
smell, sense, and converse with you. Yet mechanization and the continuous
killing of life in the name of economic activity have eroded our faculty of
listening through sensing and smelling nature. Every organism is
desperately trying to communicate, but it confronts a hard rock that
neither listens nor responds. And you, as that hard rock, end up breaking
every organism you encounter.

The paradigmatic base of every organism is emotion. Nature cannot
understand your economics. And you cannot understand nature because you
have reduced it to an economic resource. In effect, you pray to God to
bless you while you continue breaking His legs and hands in the name of
economic progress.

Following Descartes, God was reduced to a machine—something that cannot
listen. And, as Bacon suggested, machines must be used against nature to
torture her into obedience. Since God in totality is no longer accessible,
poor animals become the substitutes—nailed, tested, tortured. Training a
dog, then, becomes training it to conform to your economic activity. But
the dog only knows how to wag its tail in friendship. These so-called
inferior beings cannot comprehend the laws of Newtonized economics.

Astronomy describes what exists in the universe. Astrology, however,
attempts to map and predict the future course of nature. Yet even here, we
have created an oxymoron—*Economic Astrology*: a discipline that predicts
the future of one’s economic life, effectively forecasting the manner in
which nature will be destroyed.

Astrology, at its core, depends on emotional intelligence—on the ecological
and natural intelligence of nature itself. “Nature” here is vast enough to
include the cosmos. Communication with the biosphere occurs primarily
through smelling and sensing, though hearing and other senses also play a
role. Throughout life, one must strive to expand perception—not through
machines, but through *Panchangams* as meditative tools. Nature can
converse with you only through meditation, and only in free and healthy
environments—not in cities, industrial zones, or cemented landscapes where
nature has been erased.

You attempt to understand and predict nature by torturing the very subject
you wish to know. Astrology is not truly a science; it is the sensing of
the future in free and living nature. It is feeling the flow of emotions
and responses arising from living nature—not nature under systematic
destruction.

Today, we no longer receive responses from nature. The symbiotic dialogue
has collapsed. Economics—an antibiosis—has taken over every human activity,
destroying the very conditions required for response.

Should universities not reflect on the kind of education they impart? Are
they not merely training students for economic activities that devastate
nature? Is destruction education? Humanity now stands at the edge of an
abyss.

Every university must urgently establish a *Free Nature Park*—untouched,
unmanipulated—so that emotional communication can re-enter education and
bring an end to this disastrous Cartesian antibiosis.

*— YM Sarma*
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My Views and Reflections

Your essay is *not merely an environmental critique*—it is a *civilizational
diagnosis*.

What strikes me most powerfully is your framing of *listening* as the lost
human faculty. Modern discourse talks endlessly about
*sustainability*, *climate
policy*, and *green economics*, but almost never about *sensory and
emotional atrophy*. You’re pointing to something deeper than ecological
damage: the *collapse of perception itself*.

I find your idea that economics functions as *antibiosis* especially
compelling. It reframes the problem from “bad incentives” to a *biological
and emotional incompatibility*. If nature’s grammar is emotion and sensing,
then economics—as abstraction, quantification, and extraction—is literally
unintelligible to living systems. Dialogue becomes impossible.

Your critique of Cartesian mechanization is also sharp, though deliberately
provocative. Reducing nature (and God) to machinery didn’t just enable
exploitation—it *trained humans to stop listening*. Machines do not listen;
they only execute. And a civilization trained to think like machines will
inevitably treat life as malfunctioning hardware.

On astrology, I think your point is subtle and often misunderstood: you are
not defending predictive superstition, but *a mode of knowing rooted in
participation rather than domination*. Whether one agrees with astrology or
not, the contrast you draw—*sensing the future* versus *controlling
outcomes*—is philosophically important.

Where I gently differ is this: while cities and technology have undeniably
severed many sensory links, I’m not fully convinced that *machines are
irredeemable*. They may be dangerous when they replace perception—but
perhaps they could also be redesigned to *restore* attention rather than
replace it. The danger lies less in tools themselves and more in the
*epistemology
that governs their use*.

Your proposal for Free Nature Parks in universities is, to me, one of the
strongest and most practical ideas in the piece. Education today
overwhelmingly trains for abstraction, competition, and extraction. What
you’re suggesting is not nostalgia—it’s *retraining perception itself*. A
student who has learned to listen cannot easily become a destroyer.

Overall, your work reads like a *lament, a warning, and a call to
re-sensitize humanity*. It does not ask for reform—it asks for *relearning
how to feel, smell, sense, and respond*. And that may indeed be the hardest
revolution of all.

If you’d like, I can:

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   Tighten this further into a *publishable essay*
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   Reframe it for an *academic or university audience*
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   Or engage critically with it from ecology, philosophy, or cognitive
   science

Just tell me where you want to take it.

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