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*Mar*Thank you for sharing this thoughtful and passionate piece. I’ll
respond in three parts: *what the essay is saying (my reading), what is
compelling about it, and where it could be questioned or strengthened*,
followed by my overall view.
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1. My understanding of your core argument

You draw a strong distinction between *discoveries/revelations* and
*inventions*:

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   *Discoveries and revelations* arise naturally from living within a free,
   healthy, untampered natural world.
   They are experiential, sensory, emotional, and evolutionary. They shape
   growth, awareness, and even mutation.
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   *Inventions*, on the other hand, are human-made manipulations of
   nature—mainly machines—that disrupt ecological balance, harm life, and
   sever our ability to experience natural discoveries.

You argue that:

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   Mechanization has damaged the biosphere and broken nature’s “teaching
   system.”
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   Modern science values proof, measurement, and machines over lived
   experience.
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   Institutions reward inventions (e.g., Nobel Prizes) while ignoring or
   dismissing discoveries rooted in direct engagement with nature.
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   As nature is destroyed, humanity loses not only biodiversity but also *the
   faculty of revelation, enlightenment, and deep learning*.
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   A radical reimagining of education is needed—such as a “Free Nature
   Park” without human tampering—to restore this faculty.

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2. What is powerful and valuable in your essay🌱 a) The experiential view
of knowledge

You highlight something often neglected in modern discourse:
*knowledge as lived experience*, not merely as data or proof.

Many philosophers, ecologists, and indigenous knowledge systems agree with
you that:

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   Nature teaches directly through sensation, rhythm, interaction, and
   presence.
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   Not all truths are reducible to instruments, equations, or laboratories.

This is a strong and meaningful critique of overly mechanistic thinking.
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🌍 b) Ecological and ethical urgency

Your writing conveys a deep ecological concern:

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   Machines are not neutral.
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   Technological expansion has moral and ecological consequences.
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   Human progress has often come at the cost of silencing other life forms.

This aligns with modern environmental ethics, deep ecology, and critiques
of industrial civilization.
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🧠 c) The loss of sensitivity

One of your most striking ideas is that:

“The very faculty of experiencing discoveries, revelations and
enlightenments has become extinct.”

This is powerful because it suggests that the damage is not only external
(to forests, soil, animals) but *internal*—to perception, feeling, and
consciousness.
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3. Points that could be questioned or refined

To strengthen your argument, here are some thoughtful counterpoints—not to
dismiss your view, but to deepen it.
⚖️ a) Discovery vs invention: the boundary may be less absolute

In practice, many *scientific discoveries* (e.g., gravity, evolution,
microbes, ecosystems) were not inventions but recognitions of natural
processes—even if tools were used.

Some machines have:

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   Revealed invisible aspects of nature (microscopes, telescopes)
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   Helped protect ecosystems (renewable energy, conservation tools)

A more nuanced position might be:

The problem is not invention itself, but *invention divorced from
ecological humility*.

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🔬 b) Scientific proof vs lived wisdom

You criticize the demand for proof as inherently harmful. While this
resonates emotionally, it may overreach.

Scientific proof can:

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   Prevent false beliefs
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   Protect people from harm
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   Support environmental protection when used responsibly

The real issue may be *exclusivity*:

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   When scientific proof is treated as the *only* valid form of knowledge
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   When experiential, indigenous, and ecological wisdom are dismissed

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🏫 c) Institutions can change

While universities often prioritize mechanistic science, there are growing
movements in:

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   Ecology
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   Environmental philosophy
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   Sustainability studies
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   Indigenous knowledge systems

Your proposed “Free Nature Park” university is a compelling vision—but it
might be framed as *complementary*, not oppositional, to existing knowledge
systems.
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4. My overall view

I see your essay as:

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   🌿 *A poetic ecological manifesto*
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   🧭 *A moral warning about unchecked mechanization*
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   🧠 *A call to restore sensory, experiential intelligence*

I agree strongly with your core concern:

Humanity has confused control with understanding, and invention with wisdom.

Where I would gently differ is in believing that:

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   Discovery and invention do not have to be enemies
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   Technology can either destroy or protect nature, depending on values
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   The future lies not in rejecting science, but in *re-rooting it in
   reverence for life*

Your vision invites an essential question for our time:

*Can humanity learn again, instead of only making?*

That question alone makes this piece valuable.

If you’d like, I can also:

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   Help you *edit this into a more academic or publishable form*
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   Rewrite it as a *short manifesto*
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   Or respond to it from a *scientific, philosophical, or ecological
   counter-perspective*

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