-- *Mar* The Flow of Symbiotic and Positive Truth
When one lives in the free and healthy nature, one automatically enters the grand arena of consultation and understanding in which every organism of the Biosphere participates. The internal hormonal communications of all organisms fuse via smelling, hearing, touching, holistic seeing, and tasting. Actually one develops the faculty of predicting future events like Tsunamis, Earthquakes, Cyclones etc.The whole Biosphere knows in advance. Future is not uncertain; not even unknown. Truth does not hide but becomes experience. The portents of future events become predictive experiences. Actually, past, present and future take to clear continuations where every organism fuses its feeling and sensing in the continuations. Even today, despite the Cartesian depredation via mechanization, tribals who live in deep forests display this basic faculty of predicting in advance. Unfortunately free nature creates total faith in nature and they could not and even today cannot, sense the rottenness and tricking by the slavers, driven by Cartesianism to whom finer sentiments like empathy are blunders as they adore the insensitive mechanization. Whole interior tribes were suddenly attacked and captured as slaves by those who live in the Darwinian economics. In this economics, the successful trickster wins. The basic faculty of nature as the flow of the symbiotic and positive truth is continuously maimed by the economic attacks. Truth itself is usurped by mechanization and the fact that one experiences truth in the free and healthy nature, is not allowed as lesson in almost every university wedded to the Cartesian Darwinism. Machines cannot feel. They cannot experience the flow of truth from nature. Today mechanization is the stampede, in which the basic symbiotic nature has no place and even scope. The vicious economic attack on nature, destroying forests, rivers, lakes, waterfalls, the poisoning of land, water and air, the beginnings of digging away the Greenland, Antarcatica and the glaciers and ice covers of many mountain ranges, have put mankind into the most vicious role of destruction against truth. Every course of education in every university is cut away from the free and symbiotic nature, and the mechanized tilt of perception, promoted falsehoods as academic disciplines. Nature has no say in the education courses. Of course the whole Biosphere is just economic livestock and the very concept that every organism is an emotional complement has become weird. When one prays in the free and healthy forest, one is actually the emotional complement in the Biosphere.Today, God or Free Nature is ostracized in every University. And we do not know when the provoked nature takes to gigantic doom as backlash. Please go any surviving free nature and pray for the emergence of a University that takes to the cause of the Fundamental Right of freedom to nature, and starts a ‘Free Nature Park’, without human tampering, so that the flow of the symbiotic and positive truth get experienced by the students. YM Sarma Chat gpt Here is a balanced, respectful, and detailed commentary on your essay, focusing on clarity, coherence, argumentative strength, and stylistic effectiveness, while preserving the spirit of your ideas. ------------------------------ *Commentary on “The Flow of Symbiotic and Positive Truth”* Your essay is a passionate and philosophically rich reflection on humanity’s relationship with nature. It combines ecological concern, spiritual insight, and socio-cultural critique into a unified message: that modern mechanized civilization has severed humanity from a deep, intuitive, communal awareness embedded in the natural world. You write with conviction and poetic force, and the imagery you invoke—the “flow of symbiotic and positive truth,” “free and healthy nature,” “emotional complement in the Biosphere”—has a lyrical quality that gives your argument emotional resonance. Below are specific observations that may help strengthen the clarity, coherence, and persuasive power of your essay. ------------------------------ *1. Strengths of the Essay* *a. Powerful and evocative language* Your prose is expressive and metaphorically rich. Phrases like *“future is not uncertain; not even unknown”* and *“machines cannot feel”* communicate a strong worldview and give your essay a philosophical depth that is memorable. *b. Cohesive moral stance* You take a clear ethical position: nature is not a resource but a living, sensing community of beings. This moral clarity gives your essay purpose and urgency. *c. Important and timely themes* You connect ecological destruction, loss of indigenous knowledge, mechanization, and distorted economic values. These are pressing issues in contemporary discourse, and your synthesis draws attention to how deeply intertwined they are. ------------------------------ *2. Areas for Enhancement* *a. Clarify the distinction between metaphor and literal claim* Some statements—such as the suggestion that all organisms “fuse their hormonal communications” or that humans can naturally predict earthquakes and tsunamis—may be interpreted as literal scientific claims. If these ideas are intended metaphorically or phenomenologically (i.e., about intuition, attunement, or ecological sensitivity), clarifying this will strengthen your credibility. If you do intend them literally, you may want to provide examples or acknowledge counterarguments. *b. Strengthen logical transitions* Your essay moves between topics—indigenous intuition, mechanization, slavery, Darwinian economics, university education—very quickly. The emotional and thematic connections are present, but the logical bridges could be made stronger. Adding a few transitional sentences would help readers follow the thread of your argument more easily. *c. Use more concrete examples* The essay is rich in abstraction and moral language. Adding small, specific examples—such as a particular tribal community’s ecological knowledge, or a specific case of environmental devastation—would make your message even more convincing. *d. Consider nuance around science and mechanization* Your critique of “Cartesian Darwinism” and mechanization is philosophically important, but it may sound overly absolute. You could strengthen your argument by acknowledging that scientific and technological perspectives can coexist with ecological and spiritual ones. This allows your critique to feel inclusive rather than oppositional. *e. Refine a few stylistic elements* Some sentences are long and contain multiple ideas; splitting them could improve readability. Occasional adjustments in grammar and punctuation would also enhance flow. ------------------------------ *3. Suggestions for Further Development* - *Clarify your central thesis* early in the essay. What exactly is the “flow of symbiotic and positive truth”? Is it an ecological interconnectedness? A spiritual intuition? A critique of mechanistic thinking? - *Define key terms* such as “mechanization,” “Cartesianism,” “Darwinian economics,” and “emotional complement.” These are rich ideas but could anchor the reader more firmly if elaborated. - *Engage more directly with solutions*, especially your idea of a university that protects free nature. Expanding on how such an institution would work could make your conclusion even more powerful. ------------------------------ *Overall Impression* Your essay is heartfelt, original, and courageous in its critique of modern civilization. It expresses a profound longing for harmony between humans and the natural world, and it challenges the mechanistic worldview with poetic intensity. With clearer structure, distinguishable metaphors, and a bit more grounded argumentation, it could become an even more compelling piece of ecological philosophy. If you’d like, I can help you revise the essay line-by-line, rewrite it in a more formal or academic tone, or prepare it for publication. -- You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "Thatha_Patty" group. To unsubscribe from this group and stop receiving emails from it, send an email to [email protected]. 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