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I’ve refined punctuation, transitions, and phrasing for smoothness and coherence, but kept your tone and imagery intact. ------------------------------ *The Future* *By YM Sarma (Edited Version)* The Universe is the unending and ultimate complex sentence, written in the *present perfect continuous tense*. Everything within this infinite sentence is a word, phrase, noun clause, adjective clause, or adverb clause—each part contributing to the ever-growing structure of meaning. All of us, like everything else, are striving to move beyond the status of a single word, to become phrases, then clauses—to evolve from a noun clause into an adjective clause, and finally into an adverb clause. We take part in principal clauses, become gerunds, participles, prepositions, conjunctions, and interjections—participants in the ever-expanding sentence that is the Universe. Each of us, in our own way, contributes to this *gigantic predication*, adding meaning and illumination. We call this grand process *Time*, and our participation in it *Life*. About thirteen billion years ago, the sentence began with its first subject— *Singularity*—smaller than even an electron. Upholding the basic principle of homeopathy, “the smaller, the more powerful,” this singularity began the great act of creation: the *Big Bang*. From that moment, the sentence has been expanding endlessly, its ultimate aim being the attainment of the *speed of light*—that threshold where volume becomes infinity, or the grand *Nothing*. When all existence reaches the speed of light, words, phrases, and clauses merge into infinity. Yet they remain as *potential volume*, hinting at another Singularity and another beginning—another Big Bang. If the tiny Singularity could create the Big Bang, can we, as conscious participants in this vast sentence, not also play a significant role in shaping its meaning? How, then, should we live? Shall we become *grammar blunders*, disrupting the smooth evolution of this cosmic syntax, or shall we live *symbiotically*, helping the Universe progress toward its luminous destination—to become, perhaps, photons themselves? The *correct grammar of life* surely lies in symbiosis, not in the present antibiosis we call *economics*. Nature is struggling against our diseased economics, fighting to heal itself so it may once again contribute harmoniously to the grand sentence of the Universe. But how do we correct the errors—the ultimate blunders—caused by our economics? Humanity’s vandalism masquerades as science, yet it is merely a misguided branch of Newtonian mechanics. Our economics, rooted in *anthropocentrism*, has turned us into lunatics. And like true lunatics, we believe that everyone else—except ourselves—is mad. Our universities, tragically, join this insanity with enthusiasm. They discard *symbiotic ecology* and embrace the destructive creed of economics. In doing so, they abandon the true grammar of existence. Economics, as we practice it, is destroying the very *cosmic purpose of life*. Let us pray for the dawn of sanity in our universities, and let us return to the wisdom of *symbiotic ecology*—the grammar of harmony. Let us hope that at least one university will take the first step toward sanity: by creating a *Free Nature Park*, untouched by human interference—an offering of reverence back to the great, ever-unfolding sentence of the Universe. ------------------------------ ✨ *Editor’s Note* This version: - Preserves the *cosmic-metaphorical structure* of your essay. - Improves readability and flow through smoother transitions. - Clarifies complex ideas (especially around the grammar metaphor). - Enhances rhythm and rhetorical power without changing meaning. ------------------------------ Would you like me to prepare a *publish-ready version* (formatted for a journal, magazine, or website) with a short *author’s introduction and summary paragraph*? That would make it presentation- or submission-ready. -- You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "Thatha_Patty" group. To unsubscribe from this group and stop receiving emails from it, send an email to [email protected]. To view this discussion visit https://groups.google.com/d/msgid/thatha_patty/CACDCHC%2B-CAvDBzgDpJdY9Fc4aAq4AmstshSU2QA6B1AKsynuTQ%40mail.gmail.com.
