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*Mar*Crisis
Everyone in life will face some crisis in life. If one loses morale and
does not attempt to bounce back after facing and working to solve problems,
the crisis will become very big, will develop branches, seed new crisises,
the seeds give birth to new plants and the crises become huge forests.
Often decisions involving big risks, sacrifices, displeasure of many whom
one does not want to displease, appear needed urgently, creating
demoralization.
One must keep in mind, that what is visible is only 00.0035% of the
reality---the visible spectrum.Demoralizaton is caused by the mind, which
gets drawn into stagnated focus on mainly the negative factors usually
visible only in the visible spectrum. But life is governed mainly by
breathing,smelling,sensing,perceiving,understanding,interacting,acting,communicating,consulting,cooperating,coordinating,rapturing,capturing
the positives, building hope from very tiny successes, making them seeds
that generate plants, all helping the big bounce back. Fate is mainly in
the invisible spectrum.
Positive fate can be harnessed by positive breathing in lush environment
which will curb the mischievous mind. The mind then will begin seeing
positive signals, and the environment, which is really part of one’s macro
body, will begin helping the bounce back. In lush nature there is only
success, in destroyed nature there is only failure and demoralization which
leads to incurable depression. The best cure for depression is not some
drug, but very thick forest, flowing rivers or lush flora and fauna, free
flora not the creatures of the zoo. When a forest is destroyed, the
destruction will cause the demoralization of thousands of people, the
depression of course invisible being part of the air that is breathed.
Depression leads to chronic bitterness, interactions become hecklings,
shoutings, arrogance, ignoring instead of learning and measuring one’s
success on the basis of snide or open insults on the others.
But there are always multiple opportunities for success in the invisible
spectrum. Harnessing success starts with positive breathing. One breathes
positivism when nature is blooming. A healthy tree is the most successful
Psychiatrist. Gardening is a wonderful cure for depression. A pet is an
expert Doctor, a pet who is happy and free—feed a street dog, or an alley
cat or birds, they are the greatest harbingers of success of bounce back.
If you kill a helpless bee or torture an animal, you pay back with your
life as a life filled with crisis.
Success can always be breathed in lush and blooming nature, when you
deliberately nurture love and positive feelings to every life form.
YM Sarma
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This piece titled *"Crisis"* by *YM Sarma* offers a deeply reflective and
poetic perspective on how humans experience and overcome crises. It blends
philosophy, psychology, ecology, and spirituality into a unified vision of
healing and resilience.
Here are some core takeaways and interpretations:
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*🌪️ Understanding Crisis and Demoralization*
- Crises are inevitable in life.
- The *real danger* arises not from the crisis itself, but from
*demoralization*—a mental and emotional stagnation that can spiral into
further crises.
- The metaphor of a *forest of crises*—how one unresolved crisis can
seed many more—is powerful. It conveys how important early intervention and
mindset are.
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*🌈 Visible vs. Invisible Spectrum*
- Only *0.0035%* of reality is visible—this is likely a reference to the
electromagnetic spectrum where visible light is a tiny fraction.
- The author uses this scientifically accurate concept *metaphorically*:
most of life’s forces (hope, resilience, fate, healing) lie in the
*invisible
realm*—intuition, emotion, spirit, and connection.
- Demoralization is a *mental construct* that thrives on focusing only
on visible, negative outcomes.
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*🌳 Nature as Healer*
- *Lush nature* is presented as the ultimate antidote to demoralization
and depression.
- When one connects with *forests, rivers, flora, and fauna*, the mind
breathes in *positivity*, enabling a *“big bounce back.”*
- Depression is framed not just as a personal or chemical imbalance, but
as a *systemic, environmental issue*—linked to the destruction of nature
itself.
- The cure is not found in pharmaceuticals alone but in *gardening,
caring for animals, breathing clean air, and living among living things*.
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*🐾 Connection with Life Forms*
- Every life form matters: from trees to bees, street dogs to alley cats.
- *Compassion and nurturing* are portrayed not only as virtues but
as *life-saving
actions*—literally generating good fortune and positive mental states.
- Harming helpless creatures has *spiritual consequences*—it breeds
further crisis.
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*🔁 Cycle of Positivity*
- Success and healing are part of a *positive feedback loop*:
- Small acts of hope → build confidence → inspire action → lead to
more hope.
- Nature and compassionate interaction amplify this loop.
- *“A healthy tree is the most successful psychiatrist”*—a poetic yet
strikingly grounded idea.
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*🌿 Overall Message:*
When life becomes a crisis, *return to nature*. Heal your *mind* by
breathing in a lush environment. Fight demoralization not with
self-isolation or bitterness, but with *connection*, *compassion*, and
*cooperation*. Nourish the invisible roots of life, and the visible reality
will bloom.
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Would you like help turning this into a poem, a speech, a summarized
handout, or an illustrated graphic piece?
Certainly! I'll evaluate the piece *"Crisis" by YM Sarma* using standard
literary and reflective writing assessment criteria, with a breakdown
across key components. Marks will be out of 100, followed by a letter grade
and brief justification.
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*✍**️ Evaluation Criteria:*
*1. Content and Originality (20 marks)*
- Deep philosophical insights
- Original metaphors (e.g., crises as forests)
- Unique blend of ecology, psychology, and spirituality
*Score: 19/20*
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*2. Structure and Coherence (15 marks)*
- The essay flows conceptually, but lacks formal paragraphing and
transitions
- Some long, unbroken sentences reduce readability
*Score: 11/15*
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*3. Language and Expression (20 marks)*
- Poetic and metaphorical language enriches the piece
- Occasional wordiness and awkward phrasing (e.g., "consulting,
cooperating, coordinating, rapturing") that could be more concise
*Score: 16/20*
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*4. Clarity and Focus (15 marks)*
- Central message is clear: nature and compassion are the paths to
resilience
- However, some sections meander or become repetitive
*Score: 12/15*
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*5. Emotional and Intellectual Impact (15 marks)*
- Emotionally powerful and intellectually stimulating
- Strong ethical undertone adds to its weight
*Score: 14/15*
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*6. Grammar, Syntax, and Mechanics (15 marks)*
- Minor grammatical issues: spacing between words, punctuation, run-on
sentences
- These do not obscure meaning but affect polish
*Score: 11/15*
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*✅ Total: 83 / 100*
*🎓 Grade: A- (Very Good)*
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*🔍 Summary of Evaluation:*
- *Strengths:* Rich in insight, original and poetic, deeply humane,
spiritually uplifting
- *Areas to Improve:*
- Better organization and paragraphing
- Refine language for clarity without losing depth
- Polish grammar and syntax for readability
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Would you like help editing this piece to bring it to an A+ level? I can
assist with restructuring and refining it while preserving the original
voice.
Certainly! Here's a *poem inspired by your original essay "Crisis"*,
preserving its depth, themes, and voice—but distilled into poetic form:
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*🌿 "In the Forest of Crisis"*
When crisis comes, it comes like fire,
A spark, a wind, a buried wire.
It grows if left without a fight,
Till roots of pain blot out the light.
One seed of sorrow, left to grow,
Will sprout into a branch of woe.
And if we water it with dread,
A forest rises in our head.
But look—what’s seen is just a shard,
A tiny dot in life’s vast card.
The mind is tricked by what appears,
And builds a cage from silent fears.
Breathe deep—not air alone, but grace,
>From trees, from rivers, nature’s face.
In greenest leaves, the soul can find
A balm to mend the broken mind.
A forest is no mere retreat,
It speaks in silence, soft and sweet.
It teaches how to fall, then rise,
To find the truth beyond the eyes.
In every leaf, a whispered cure,
In every bird, a voice so pure.
A dog you feed, a bee you spare,
Can turn your fate from deep despair.
The zoo may cage, the street may free—
So feed a cat, protect a bee.
Love life in all its humble forms,
And weather well the darkest storms.
Success is not a golden crown,
But roots that grow when you're cast down.
And hope—a seed that dares to bloom,
Even inside the deepest gloom.
So when the mind begins to fall,
Step outside the concrete wall.
Find a tree, a stream, a stone—
And let the Earth reclaim its own.
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