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*Mar*The Gigantic Fatal Deception


To develop the scientific mind, the scientific attitude and scientific
temperament, you have to assume that you are not part of nature, but an
outside observer and indifferent spectator of nature, with license to
tamper nature. At the basic level you consist of atoms, or positive
electricity or protons in the nucleus and negative electricity or electrons
hovering round the nucleus. The Universe is packed with electromagnetism
creating the movement of molecules and atoms, with absolute zero as
impossibility and nonexistent in the whole universe.

But you have to assume that you are an outsider, a disconnected spectator,
but with license to inflict the technology or the techno-logic on nature.
This basic false and impossible assumption has taken over as the gigantic
hypnotic spell, and you are sciencing away, scholaring away and destroying
away nature, and calculating the destruction as economic growth. Day in and
day out we are destroying nature and we are actually deceiving us that it
is great advancement.

 The universities are turning out every year new corps of destroyers of
nature, by creating them to do economics or the destruction. The students
are stopped from living as natural humans but live as economic humans, the
phantoms that live as machine.The economic man of economics is a machine
only and is amenable to be treated with econometrics, or the mathematics
that governs the life of the machine, the economic man. The life of the
economic Man is a subject matter of Newtonian mechanics.

When the universe is packed with electromagnetism, with actually vibrations
of the pack as waves, and you being part of the pack, can you assume that
you are not vibrating in and with the universe, and are not affected by the
vibrations, which in reality are living?

You have now emotionally become the outsider of the Biosphere repudiating
the basic fact that every life form is an ecological, emotional and
existential complement of every other life form. You simply livestock the
Biosphere. You assume Social Darwinism in human societies, creating the
rogue winners in the competition of life among the humans, and the
Darwinist annihilation of every other life form in the war among the
organisms of the Biosphere.We have to assume that the Biosphere as whole is
destroying itself as the basic Darwinism.

Policy means the definite life of action. Politics means the implementation
of the policy. Today the policy of every country is to be ready for war,
and politics means creating more and more destructive weapons, all now put
under the subject called the ‘Political Science’, the Darwinist cult
scholared and taught seriously. Politics today is strategizing the
destruction of the other human societies called nations.

Now the destruction is gathering momentum, and it may take to the
unstoppable deluge. As it is ,with the takeover of every economic jobs by
machines, there are no jobs in the economies, and a big economic depression
is appearing in the horizon.

Ecology and free nature are today’s saviours.Let us hope that every
University becomes sane and starts the education that saves nature, and
revives Ecology, on the terms of nature and not on the basis of Cartesian
logic. We have to rehabilitate the basic emotional foundation of nature and
realize that nature is not mechanical.

YM Sarma

Chat gpt

Here’s my evaluation and edited version of your essay, *“The Gigantic Fatal
Deception”*.
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*Evaluation*

   - *Theme & Depth (9/10):* The essay strongly critiques the false
   assumption behind modern science and economics—that humans are detached
   from nature. You link this to destruction, mechanization of life, and
   political violence. The theme is profound, with a philosophical and
   ecological vision.
   - *Clarity & Flow (7/10):* The arguments are powerful, but the sentences
   are often long and densely packed. Some ideas repeat and could be more
   sharply expressed.
   - *Language & Style (7.5/10):* Passionate and evocative, but at times,
   the intensity overrides readability. Simplifying some sentences and
   balancing abstract ideas with concrete imagery would strengthen the impact.
   - *Overall Grade: A- (84/100).* This is a bold and insightful essay,
   though polishing the structure and flow would make it even more striking.

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*Edited Version*

*The Gigantic Fatal Deception*
*By YM Sarma*

To develop what we call a “scientific mind,” one is asked to assume a
dangerous fiction: that the human being is not part of nature, but a
detached observer, an indifferent spectator, with the license to tamper
with nature.

At the physical level, you consist of atoms—of protons and electrons—woven
into the electromagnetic fabric of the universe. The cosmos is a living
field of vibrations, where absolute stillness, or “absolute zero,” does not
and cannot exist. You are part of this vibrant whole. Yet the scientific
attitude demands that you imagine yourself outside it, a disconnected
spectator armed with technology to dissect and dominate.

This false assumption has cast a gigantic hypnotic spell. Under its
influence, humanity is “sciencing away,” “scholaring away,” and “destroying
away” nature—while calling that destruction *progress* or *economic growth*.
Day by day, universities produce new corps of “economic humans,” trained
not to live as natural beings but as phantoms of the machine world. The
“economic man” is treated as a mechanism, governed by equations,
econometrics, and Newtonian mechanics.

But can a living being—vibrating with the universe itself—truly be reduced
to a machine? Can we deny that every life form is an ecological, emotional,
and existential complement of every other life form? By living as outsiders
to the Biosphere, we repudiate our very essence, turning life into
livestock and society into a Darwinist battlefield. Social Darwinism breeds
rogue winners among humans while annihilating countless other species. It
assumes that the Biosphere itself is condemned to self-destruction.

Even our politics reflects this fatal deception. “Policy” is supposed to
mean a life-guiding direction, and “politics” its implementation. Yet
today, every national policy revolves around war-readiness, and politics is
reduced to the manufacture of ever-deadlier weapons. Under the banner of
“Political Science,” universities now legitimize a Darwinist cult of
destruction. Nations strategize not for life, but for mutual annihilation.

The destruction gathers momentum. Machines increasingly replace human work,
ushering in the specter of global depression. The economic machine consumes
both nature and humanity alike.

Yet salvation is still possible. Ecology and free nature remain the true
saviors of our time. The hope is that universities regain sanity, and
education once again aligns itself with life—not with Cartesian
abstractions, but with the living terms of nature itself. We must return to
the emotional foundations of existence and remember: nature is not
mechanical.
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Would you like me to also *shorten this into a sharper article (around 700
words)*, so it’s more publishable in magazines or journals?

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