Mantra (मन्त्र) is a sacred formula and is so called because it is
meditated upon—‘*mananāt mantraḥ*’. It protects those who reflect or
meditate on it—“*mananāt trāyate iti mantraḥ* (*mananatrāṇadharmāṇo*)”.
Thus mantra, as per its etymology, is an instrument for meditation,
reflection, perception and deep thinking.  KR

On Fri, 8 Aug 2025 at 15:02, Markendeya Yeddanapudi <
[email protected]> wrote:

>
>
> --
> *Mar*Mantra
>
> When the environment was lush with flora and fauna, when one walked,
> thoughts walked with him/her as smells. Every organism smelt the thoughts
> and thoughts walked ahead of the person. All organisms conversed through
> smelling and sensing. He/she received answers continuously on the way. The
> thought interaction was continuous and uninterrupted. The air became
> smells/thoughts filled. The air became spirit. The Spirits created thought
> revolutions. They became the Mantras that created the Butterfly effects in
> thought exchange and interaction. The Biosphere became spiritual. Every new
> Mantra created Yogasanas for embedding the thought cycle. He/she developed
> the expertise in using the powerful thoughts as Mantras. The Mantras
> created the Butterfly effects. All organisms simmered in new and new
> thoughts.
>
> The research of those days was spirit based research, in which the entire
> Biosphere participated. Every organism was bound spiritually with other
> organisms. In that, the new findings automatically became common
> understandings. All organisms smelt and understood. There were no snobs
> posing superior. There was no Darwin who said that rogues or snobs, the
> fittest only survive.
>
> Today words are not Mantras that create the butterfly thought effects.
> They may create mass anxiety and neurosis only. For clear meanings one has
> to struggle with definitions and scopes. The definitions just come, stay
> for a while and then die. Thoughts have become impotent. Technology is the
> Viagra that helps in rutting without love.
>
> A Free Nature Park without any human tampering may again revive the magic
> of Manthras.But scoffing at them is today’s fashion.
>
> YM Sarma
>
> This piece by YM Sarma is a poetic and philosophical reflection on the
> profound connection between thought, nature, and spirit—a connection the
> author believes has been lost in the modern, technologically dominated
> world.
>
> Here’s a breakdown of key themes and meanings in the text:
> ------------------------------
>
> *🌿 1. Ancient Thought as Spirit-Based Communication*
>
>    - *"When the environment was lush with flora and fauna..."*
>    The piece begins by imagining or remembering a time when humans and
>    all organisms communicated not just through language, but through *scent
>    and sensation*, a more instinctual and spiritual form of communication.
>    - *"Thoughts walked with him/her as smells."*
>    Thoughts had *material, sensory presence*—they could be smelled and
>    understood by others. Communication was *non-verbal and universal*,
>    crossing species boundaries.
>
> ------------------------------
>
> *🔄 2. Mantras as Thought Revolutions*
>
>    - *"The Spirits created thought revolutions. They became the
>    Mantras..."*
>    Mantras aren't merely sacred sounds; they are *spiritual, energetic
>    catalysts* that initiate transformation and awareness—akin to the 
> *butterfly
>    effect*, where small inputs cause vast changes.
>    - *"Every new Mantra created Yogasanas for embedding the thought
>    cycle."*
>    Yogasanas (yoga postures) are described as *physical manifestations*
>    of these mantras—ways to embody and preserve the spiritual insights.
>
> ------------------------------
>
> *🌍 3. A Spiritually Connected Biosphere*
>
>    - *"The research of those days was spirit-based..."*
>    The author speaks of a *lost era* where all living beings participated
>    in a collective intelligence. Discovery wasn’t individual or competitive—it
>    was *communal and spiritual*.
>    - *"There was no Darwin who said... the fittest only survive."*
>    A rejection of *Darwinian competition* in favor of *spiritual
>    symbiosis*. No hierarchy, no superiority—only mutual understanding.
>
> ------------------------------
>
> *⚠️ 4. Decay of Thought in Modern Times*
>
>    - *"Today words are not Mantras..."*
>    In modernity, words have lost their power. They are more likely to
>    create *confusion, anxiety, and mental illness* than enlightenment.
>    - *"Technology is the Viagra that helps in rutting without love."*
>    A striking metaphor. Technology is seen as an artificial stimulant for
>    a world *devoid of authentic connection*—it enables action, but
>    without spirit, depth, or meaning.
>
> ------------------------------
>
> *🌱 5. Hope for Revival*
>
>    - *"A Free Nature Park... may again revive the magic of Manthras."*
>    Despite the critique, there's a glimmer of hope: *untouched nature*
>    may once again awaken the *spiritual potency* of thought and mantras.
>    - *"But scoffing at them is today’s fashion."*
>    Sadly, spiritual or ancient wisdom is often dismissed in today's
>    cynical, hyper-rational culture.
>
> ------------------------------
>
> *🧘‍♀️ Conclusion:*
>
> YM Sarma offers a *deeply critical yet poetic* vision of the current age,
> contrasting it with a mythical or remembered time of *sacred, symbiotic
> existence*. It’s a *lament for lost wisdom*, but also a call to *revive
> the power of genuine, spirit-filled thought* through reconnection with
> nature.
> ------------------------------
>
> Would you like to turn this into a more structured essay or use it in a
> creative or academic project?
>
> Certainly! Here's an evaluative breakdown of YM Sarma's piece, considering
> it as a *philosophical-poetic prose composition*. The evaluation will be
> based on key literary and conceptual criteria, with a final *grade and
> mark out of 100*.
> ------------------------------
> 📝 *Evaluation Criteria*
>
> *Criteria*
>
> *Max Marks*
>
> *Marks Awarded*
>
> *Comments*
>
> *1. Conceptual Depth & Originality*
>
> 25
>
> *24*
>
> Highly original. The idea of thoughts as smells, and mantras as spiritual
> catalysts in a biospheric communication system, is profound and unique.
>
> *2. Philosophical Coherence*
>
> 20
>
> *17*
>
> The ideas flow with emotional and spiritual depth, though not always
> logically linear. The critique of modernity is powerful but somewhat broad
> and sweeping.
>
> *3. Literary Style & Imagery*
>
> 20
>
> *18*
>
> Rich, poetic language; strong metaphors ("Technology is the Viagra...")
> evoke strong imagery. Some readers may find it abstract or dense.
>
> *4. Structure & Organization*
>
> 10
>
> *7*
>
> The structure is intuitive but nonlinear. It reads more like a stream of
> consciousness or modern sutra than a traditional essay. This suits the tone
> but may lose some readers.
>
> *5. Clarity & Accessibility*
>
> 10
>
> *6*
>
> Dense and philosophical language requires high reader engagement. Concepts
> like “smelling thoughts” are metaphysical and may not be immediately
> graspable.
>
> *6. Relevance & Message*
>
> 15
>
> *14*
>
> The piece addresses urgent themes: disconnection from nature, spiritual
> erosion, and the cost of technological alienation. The final call to
> restore the sacred is powerful.
> ------------------------------
> 🎓 *Total Marks: 86 / 100*
> ------------------------------
> 📊 *Grade: A*
> ------------------------------
> 📘 *General Comments:*
>
> This is a *powerful, thought-provoking* composition that blends *poetic
> imagination* with *deep ecological and spiritual philosophy*. It resists
> the dry rationalism of modern thought, instead evoking a world where
> consciousness is collective and reverent. There is a clear reverence for
> ancient ways of knowing and being.
>
> However, the *abstract nature* of the metaphors and structure might
> challenge readers unfamiliar with such a style. The piece would benefit
> from slight refinement if intended for a broader audience.
> ------------------------------
>
> Would you like suggestions on how to refine or expand this piece, perhaps
> for publication or presentation?
>
>
>
> Certainly. Here's a *poem* inspired by the themes and imagery in YM
> Sarma's original piece — the unity of spirit, thought, nature, and the
> silent decay in the modern age.
> ------------------------------
> *Whispers of the Mantra*
>
> When forests breathed in ancient rhyme,
> And leaves would stir to thoughts in time,
> A footstep borne on moss and dew
> Would hum a truth the wild ones knew.
>
> The wind would carry silent speech,
> Beyond what human tongues could reach,
> In scent and pulse the thoughts would soar,
> From root to sky, from soul to shore.
>
> The butterfly of mind took flight,
> With mantras whispered into light,
> And every tree, and every stream
> Joined in the fabric of the dream.
>
> No books, no screens, no wired brain,
> Just rain that taught, and stars that sang.
> Each yoga pose a living glyph,
> Each breath a cosmic hieroglyph.
>
> No fittest beast, no master mind,
> But spirit shared through all mankind.
> The tiger knew the sage’s thought,
> The ant in soil with wisdom wrought.
>
> But now, the air is thick with sound,
> Words that fail and fears unbound.
> We speak, but sense is thin and dry—
> Our thoughts no longer learn to fly.
>
> Yet deep within a fern’s green curl,
> A mantra waits to wake the world.
> In silent groves where humans fade,
> The ancient codes are still replayed.
>
> Return to earth, unlearn your name—
> Let sky and scent ignite the flame.
> For in the hush of leaf and bark,
> The lost mantras still leave a spark.
> ------------------------------
>
> Would you like a version in a different tone—like more modern, minimal, or
> suitable for children?
>
>
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