- just call it (a sh(1)) script, in line with MAKEDEV(8) and rc.d(8) - use only .Nm thereafter instead of .Nm/the .Nm script/... - zap the additional rc.conf(8) bits for they can be found in there - zap unhelpful "(or can be)"
Feedback? Objection? OK? Index: netstart.8 =================================================================== RCS file: /cvs/src/share/man/man8/netstart.8,v retrieving revision 1.30 diff -u -p -r1.30 netstart.8 --- netstart.8 25 Oct 2022 08:40:25 -0000 1.30 +++ netstart.8 25 Oct 2022 09:46:32 -0000 @@ -30,25 +30,24 @@ .Os .Sh NAME .Nm netstart -.Nd command script for network startup +.Nd network startup script .Sh SYNOPSIS .Cm sh Pa /etc/netstart .Op Fl n .Op Ar interface ... .Sh DESCRIPTION .Nm -is the command script that is invoked by +is the +.Xr sh 1 +script invoked by .Xr rc 8 during an automatic reboot and after single-user mode is exited; it performs network initialization. .Pp -The .Nm -script can also be used to start newly created interfaces. -The behaviour of this script is (or can be) controlled to some -extent by variables defined in -.Xr rc.conf 8 , -which specifies which daemons and services are to be run. +can also be used to start newly created interfaces. +Its behaviour is controlled to some extent by variables defined in +.Xr rc.conf 8 . .Pp During the system boot, .Nm