- just call it (a sh(1)) script, in line with MAKEDEV(8) and rc.d(8)
- use only .Nm thereafter instead of .Nm/the .Nm script/...
- zap the additional rc.conf(8) bits for they can be found in there
- zap unhelpful "(or can be)"

Feedback? Objection? OK?


Index: netstart.8
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RCS file: /cvs/src/share/man/man8/netstart.8,v
retrieving revision 1.30
diff -u -p -r1.30 netstart.8
--- netstart.8  25 Oct 2022 08:40:25 -0000      1.30
+++ netstart.8  25 Oct 2022 09:46:32 -0000
@@ -30,25 +30,24 @@
 .Os
 .Sh NAME
 .Nm netstart
-.Nd command script for network startup
+.Nd network startup script
 .Sh SYNOPSIS
 .Cm sh Pa /etc/netstart
 .Op Fl n
 .Op Ar interface ...
 .Sh DESCRIPTION
 .Nm
-is the command script that is invoked by
+is the
+.Xr sh 1
+script invoked by
 .Xr rc 8
 during an automatic reboot and after single-user mode is exited;
 it performs network initialization.
 .Pp
-The
 .Nm
-script can also be used to start newly created interfaces.
-The behaviour of this script is (or can be) controlled to some
-extent by variables defined in
-.Xr rc.conf 8 ,
-which specifies which daemons and services are to be run.
+can also be used to start newly created interfaces.
+Its behaviour is controlled to some extent by variables defined in
+.Xr rc.conf 8 .
 .Pp
 During the system boot,
 .Nm

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