On Thu, Jan 07, 2021 at 04:03:41PM +0100, Claudio Jeker wrote:
> Here is my try to extend ip(4) to also document struct ip_mreqn.
> Not sure what is the best way to document the option to use either struct
> ip_mreq or struct ip_mreqn with IP_ADD_MEMBERSHIP.
> 
> -- 
> :wq Claudio
> 

hi! comments inline:

> Index: ip.4
> ===================================================================
> RCS file: /cvs/src/share/man/man4/ip.4,v
> retrieving revision 1.41
> diff -u -p -r1.41 ip.4
> --- ip.4      18 Aug 2016 11:45:18 -0000      1.41
> +++ ip.4      7 Jan 2021 14:58:54 -0000
> @@ -411,13 +411,21 @@ setsockopt(s, IPPROTO_IP, IP_ADD_MEMBERS
>  .Pp
>  where
>  .Fa mreq
> -is the following structure:
> +is either the following structure:

we could probably tidy this up:

        ...
        is either of the following structures:
        .Bd ...
        <both structures in here>
        .Ed

>  .Bd -literal -offset indent
>  struct ip_mreq {
>      struct in_addr imr_multiaddr; /* multicast group to join */
>      struct in_addr imr_interface; /* interface to join on */
>  }
>  .Ed
> +or
> +.Bd -literal -offset indent
> +struct ip_mreqn {
> +    struct in_addr imr_multiaddr; /* multicast group to join */
> +    struct in_addr imr_address;   /* local IP address of interface */
> +    int            imr_ifindex;   /* interface index to join*/

space between "join" and "*"

> +};
> +.Ed
>  .Pp
>  .Va imr_interface
>  should
> @@ -428,6 +436,12 @@ or the
>  .Tn IP
>  address of a particular multicast-capable interface if
>  the host is multihomed.
> +.Va imr_ifindex
> +of
> +.Va struct ip_mreqn

this reads funny. maybe

        The
        .Va imr..
        element of
        .Va struct...

or similar wording

> +can be set to the interface index instead of specifying the
> +.Tn IP
> +address of a  particular multicast-capable interface.
>  Membership is associated with a single interface;
>  programs running on multihomed hosts may need to
>  join the same group on more than one interface.
> 

jmc

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