Hi Michael,
Michael Reed wrote on Mon, Sep 21, 2015 at 04:42:02PM -0400:
> Index: src/share/man/man7/ports.7
> ===================================================================
> RCS file: /cvs/src/share/man/man7/ports.7,v
> retrieving revision 1.103
> diff -u -p -r1.103 ports.7
> --- src/share/man/man7/ports.7 24 Aug 2015 12:57:14 -0000 1.103
> +++ src/share/man/man7/ports.7 21 Sep 2015 20:40:20 -0000
> @@ -140,8 +140,7 @@ apply.
> .Sh TARGETS
> Individual ports are controlled through a few documented targets.
> Some of these targets work recursively through subdirectories, so that
> -someone can, for example, install all of the net
> -ports.
> +someone can, for example, install all of the net ports.
> .Pp
> The variable
> .Ev SKIPDIR
Gratuitious, nothing is wrong here. Re-wrapping can be done when
changing the text anyway, but i don't see the point in losing
history when there is no real change.
> @@ -429,7 +428,8 @@ This shows up as undefined references in
> is no choice but to proceed the old way: deinstall the offending package
> and everything built on top of it, build and install new packages.
> .Sh BULK PACKAGE BUILDING
> -Building any significant number of packages from the ports tree should use
> +Building any significant number of packages from the ports tree should be
> done
> +with
> .Xr dpb 1 ,
> a tool located inside the ports tree proper
> .Po
Both versions look fine to me, no need to change.
Ceteris paribus, short and active is often better.
> @@ -439,7 +439,7 @@ normally as
> In particular, it can take advantage of machine clusters (same architecture
> and same installation), and of multi-core machines.
> .Pp
> -A few remarks may save a lot of time
> +A few remarks may save a lot of time:
> .Bl -bullet
> .It
> The default limits in
> @@ -451,7 +451,7 @@ For instance, a lot of C++-based ports w
> .Ar datasize
> over 1G.
> .It
> -cluster builds should have shared
> +Cluster builds should have shared
> .Ev PORTSDIR
> and local
> .Ev WRKOBJDIR .
> @@ -461,10 +461,10 @@ partitions mounted
> .Sq noatime,async
> will help.
> .It
> -as far as possible, the log directory should be local to the machine running
> +As far as possible, the log directory should be local to the machine running
> .Xr dpb 1 .
> .It
> -a full bulk will fetch over 20G of distfiles, create over 17G of packages.
> +A full bulk will fetch over 20G of distfiles and create over 17G of packages.
> The largest work directories are about 10G each.
> .It
> Take notice of
> @@ -634,7 +634,7 @@ Location of the ports tree
> .Pa /usr/ports ) .
> .It Ev DISTDIR
> Where to find/put distfiles, normally
> -.Pa ${PORTSDIR}/distfiles
> +.Pa ${PORTSDIR}/distfiles .
> .It Ev PACKAGE_REPOSITORY
> Used only for the
> .Cm package
Committed these four chunks.
Thanks,
Ingo
