On Mon, 24 Nov 2014 18:14:37 +0001, Jason McIntyre wrote:

> the thing is, it still looks a bit odd. because you cannot specify
> "file" without -f, right? (i'm supposing that - ignore my text
> otherwise.) so even if technically -f does not accept an
> argument, the logical connection is there.

Yes.

> and you have the description of the -f flag, which is where you describe
> "file". it just reinforces it.

Well, I was considering changing that but I was afraid it would be
even more confusing.

> for the user, i think it will be clearer just to leave it as "-f [file]"
> in the options list. no strong objection though, it's just my
> opinion.

OK.

> also one note inline:
> 
> > Index: usr.bin/mail/mail.1
> > ===================================================================
> > --- usr.bin/mail/mail.1.orig
> > +++ usr.bin/mail/mail.1
> > @@ -79,13 +79,16 @@ to output all sorts of information usefu
> >  .Nm mail .
> >  .It Fl E
> >  Don't send messages with an empty body.
> > -.It Fl f Op Ar file
> > -Read in the contents of your mailbox
> > -(or the specified
> > -.Ar file )
> > -for processing; when you quit,
> > +.It Fl f
> > +Use an alternate mailbox.
> > +Defaults to the user's
> > +.Ar mbox
> > +if no
> > +.Ar file
> > +is specified.
> > +When quit,
> >  .Nm mail
> > -writes undeleted messages back to this
> > +will write undeleted messages back to this
> 
> i wouldn't make the "writes" -> "will write" change. i think present
> tense for this type of sentence structure is simpler for readers. modals
> and tenses can be awfully ambiguous.

OK.

 - todd

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