Re: [Qemu-devel] [PATCHv4] Improve documentation for TLS

2016-04-07 Thread Alex Bligh
On 7 Apr 2016, at 21:35, Eric Blake wrote: > grammar tweak: > s/ and either /, / sigh. fixed. Remembered to add your Reviewed-by: tag too. -- Alex Bligh signature.asc Description: Message signed with OpenPGP using GPGMail

Re: [Qemu-devel] [PATCHv4] Improve documentation for TLS

2016-04-07 Thread Eric Blake
On 04/07/2016 02:07 PM, Alex Bligh wrote: > * Call out TLS into a separate section > > * Add details of the TLS protocol itself > > * Emphasise that actual TLS session initiation (i.e. the TLS handshake) can > be initiated from either side (as required by the TLS standard I believe > and as a

[Qemu-devel] [PATCHv4] Improve documentation for TLS

2016-04-07 Thread Alex Bligh
* Call out TLS into a separate section * Add details of the TLS protocol itself * Emphasise that actual TLS session initiation (i.e. the TLS handshake) can be initiated from either side (as required by the TLS standard I believe and as actually works in practice) * Clarify what is a requirem