Re: [patch, doc] copy-edit inline asm sections

2015-02-07 Thread Sandra Loosemore
On 02/05/2015 11:34 PM, David Wohlferd wrote: On 2/5/2015 9:13 AM, Sandra Loosemore wrote: In addition to fixing markup and capitalization, I've moved things around a little bit to improve the flow, and rephrased a few things that I thought were awkward or confusing. I propose to commit this i

Re: [patch, doc] copy-edit inline asm sections

2015-02-06 Thread Jeff Law
On 02/05/15 10:13, Sandra Loosemore wrote: It looks to me like that, when the rewrite of the inline asm sections was committed last May (r210273), there was general agreement that it needed additional copy-editing to fix markup problems and the like. But, nobody ever followed up to do that. Here

Re: [patch, doc] copy-edit inline asm sections

2015-02-05 Thread David Wohlferd
On 2/5/2015 9:13 AM, Sandra Loosemore wrote: In addition to fixing markup and capitalization, I've moved things around a little bit to improve the flow, and rephrased a few things that I thought were awkward or confusing. I propose to commit this in a few days unless somebody tells me meanwhi