On 02/05/2015 11:34 PM, David Wohlferd wrote:
On 2/5/2015 9:13 AM, Sandra Loosemore wrote:
In addition to fixing markup and capitalization, I've moved things
around a little bit to improve the flow, and rephrased a few things
that I thought were awkward or confusing. I propose to commit this i
On 02/05/15 10:13, Sandra Loosemore wrote:
It looks to me like that, when the rewrite of the inline asm sections
was committed last May (r210273), there was general agreement that it
needed additional copy-editing to fix markup problems and the like. But,
nobody ever followed up to do that.
Here
On 2/5/2015 9:13 AM, Sandra Loosemore wrote:
In addition to fixing markup and capitalization, I've moved things
around a little bit to improve the flow, and rephrased a few things
that I thought were awkward or confusing. I propose to commit this in
a few days unless somebody tells me meanwhi
It looks to me like that, when the rewrite of the inline asm sections
was committed last May (r210273), there was general agreement that it
needed additional copy-editing to fix markup problems and the like.
But, nobody ever followed up to do that.
Here's my attempt. In addition to fixing mar
