On 2021-07-14 13:58:07 (+1000), Allan McRae via arch-dev-public wrote:
> I just read the document as it stands after your proposed changes. My
> conclusion was it is too long, often explained points in too much
> detail, and was too long!
I agree. The current work focusses mainly on splitting out
On 2021-07-14 12:00, David Runge via arch-dev-public wrote:
> On 2021-07-14 13:58:07 (+1000), Allan McRae via arch-dev-public wrote:
> > I highly recommend taking a scalpel to the current text. I'm happy to
> > take a pass if you would like my suggestions in more solid format.
>
> That would be v
