On Mon, Feb 24, 2020 at 03:55:40PM -0500, Jagannathan Raman wrote:
> From: John G Johnson <[email protected]>
> 
> Signed-off-by: John G Johnson <[email protected]>
> Signed-off-by: Elena Ufimtseva <[email protected]>
> Signed-off-by: Jagannathan Raman <[email protected]>
> ---
>  docs/devel/index.rst             |    1 +
>  docs/devel/qemu-multiprocess.rst | 1102 
> ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
>  2 files changed, 1103 insertions(+)
>  create mode 100644 docs/devel/qemu-multiprocess.rst
> 
> diff --git a/docs/devel/index.rst b/docs/devel/index.rst
> index 4dc2ca8..1a95871 100644
> --- a/docs/devel/index.rst
> +++ b/docs/devel/index.rst
> @@ -25,3 +25,4 @@ Contents:
>     tcg-plugins
>     bitops
>     reset
> +   multi-process
> diff --git a/docs/devel/qemu-multiprocess.rst 
> b/docs/devel/qemu-multiprocess.rst
> new file mode 100644
> index 0000000..477e246
> --- /dev/null
> +++ b/docs/devel/qemu-multiprocess.rst
> @@ -0,0 +1,1102 @@
> +Disaggregating QEMU

Please revise this document and the patch series to use consistent
terminology.  At least "qemu-multiprocess.rst", "--enable-mpqemu", and
"disaggregated QEMU" are used to describe this feature (there are
probably more, I have only looked at 2 patches so far).

It's confusing for someone who stumbles across one of these terms and
then has to figure out that we're talking about the same thing when
encountering other terms later on.

Please use a single name and use it consistently.

> +===================
> +
> +QEMU is often used as the hypervisor for virtual machines running in the
> +Oracle cloud. Since one of the advantages of cloud computing is the
> +ability to run many VMs from different tenants in the same cloud
> +infrastructure, a guest that compromised its hypervisor could
> +potentially use the hypervisor's access privileges to access data it is
> +not authorized for.
> +
> +QEMU can be susceptible to security attack because it is a large,

s/attack/attacks/

> +monolithic program that provides many features to the VMs it services.
> +Many of these feature can be configured out of QEMU, but even a reduced

s/feature/features/

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