On Thu, 7 Dec 2023 at 08:07, Alex Bennée <[email protected]> wrote:
>
> I noticed the code blocks where not rendering properly so thought I'd
> better fix things up. So:
>
>   - Use better title for the machine type
>   - Explain why Xen is a little different
>   - Add a proper anchor to the tpm-device link
>   - add newline so code block properly renders
>   - add some indentation to make continuation clearer
>
> Signed-off-by: Alex Bennée <[email protected]>
> ---
>  docs/specs/tpm.rst         |  2 ++
>  docs/system/arm/xenpvh.rst | 39 +++++++++++++++++++++-----------------
>  2 files changed, 24 insertions(+), 17 deletions(-)

QEMU 8.2.0-rc3 has already been tagged. At this stage only critical
bugs (crashes during startup, security issues, serious memory leaks,
etc).

This patch looks like a nice documentation fix but it has a limited
scope and I don't think it warrants rolling an -rc4 tag next week.

Do you agree with deferring this patch until after the 8.2 release?

Stefan

>
> diff --git a/docs/specs/tpm.rst b/docs/specs/tpm.rst
> index efe124a148..c96776a369 100644
> --- a/docs/specs/tpm.rst
> +++ b/docs/specs/tpm.rst
> @@ -1,3 +1,5 @@
> +.. _tpm-device:
> +
>  ===============
>  QEMU TPM Device
>  ===============
> diff --git a/docs/system/arm/xenpvh.rst b/docs/system/arm/xenpvh.rst
> index e1655c7ab8..430ac2c02e 100644
> --- a/docs/system/arm/xenpvh.rst
> +++ b/docs/system/arm/xenpvh.rst
> @@ -1,34 +1,39 @@
> -XENPVH (``xenpvh``)
> +Xen Device Emulation Backend (``xenpvh``)
>  =========================================
> -This machine creates a IOREQ server to register/connect with Xen Hypervisor.
>
> -When TPM is enabled, this machine also creates a tpm-tis-device at a user 
> input
> -tpm base address, adds a TPM emulator and connects to a swtpm application
> -running on host machine via chardev socket. This enables xenpvh to support 
> TPM
> -functionalities for a guest domain.
> +This machine is a little unusual compared to others as QEMU just acts
> +as an IOREQ server to register/connect with Xen Hypervisor. Control of
> +the VMs themselves is left to the Xen tooling.
>
> -More information about TPM use and installing swtpm linux application can be
> -found at: docs/specs/tpm.rst.
> +When TPM is enabled, this machine also creates a tpm-tis-device at a
> +user input tpm base address, adds a TPM emulator and connects to a
> +swtpm application running on host machine via chardev socket. This
> +enables xenpvh to support TPM functionalities for a guest domain.
> +
> +More information about TPM use and installing swtpm linux application
> +can be found in the :ref:`tpm-device` section.
>
>  Example for starting swtpm on host machine:
> +
>  .. code-block:: console
>
>      mkdir /tmp/vtpm2
>      swtpm socket --tpmstate dir=/tmp/vtpm2 \
> -    --ctrl type=unixio,path=/tmp/vtpm2/swtpm-sock &
> +      --ctrl type=unixio,path=/tmp/vtpm2/swtpm-sock &
>
>  Sample QEMU xenpvh commands for running and connecting with Xen:
> +
>  .. code-block:: console
>
>      qemu-system-aarch64 -xen-domid 1 \
> -    -chardev socket,id=libxl-cmd,path=qmp-libxl-1,server=on,wait=off \
> -    -mon chardev=libxl-cmd,mode=control \
> -    -chardev 
> socket,id=libxenstat-cmd,path=qmp-libxenstat-1,server=on,wait=off \
> -    -mon chardev=libxenstat-cmd,mode=control \
> -    -xen-attach -name guest0 -vnc none -display none -nographic \
> -    -machine xenpvh -m 1301 \
> -    -chardev socket,id=chrtpm,path=tmp/vtpm2/swtpm-sock \
> -    -tpmdev emulator,id=tpm0,chardev=chrtpm -machine tpm-base-addr=0x0C000000
> +      -chardev socket,id=libxl-cmd,path=qmp-libxl-1,server=on,wait=off \
> +      -mon chardev=libxl-cmd,mode=control \
> +      -chardev 
> socket,id=libxenstat-cmd,path=qmp-libxenstat-1,server=on,wait=off \
> +      -mon chardev=libxenstat-cmd,mode=control \
> +      -xen-attach -name guest0 -vnc none -display none -nographic \
> +      -machine xenpvh -m 1301 \
> +      -chardev socket,id=chrtpm,path=tmp/vtpm2/swtpm-sock \
> +      -tpmdev emulator,id=tpm0,chardev=chrtpm -machine 
> tpm-base-addr=0x0C000000
>
>  In above QEMU command, last two lines are for connecting xenpvh QEMU to swtpm
>  via chardev socket.
> --
> 2.39.2
>
>

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