colomar added a comment.

  See inline comments. Otherwise it looks good!

INLINE COMMENTS

> ondemand.rst:27
> +   on-demand controls. If you need more actions, choose a different 
> +   :doc:`navigation pattern </patterns/navigation/index>`.
> +-  Only use on-demand controls, if the actions are the same for each item.

Since this is a command pattern, shouldn't this link to command patterns 
instead of navigation patterns?

> ondemand.rst:57
> +handle is slid back.
> +
> +

I'd add a screenshot of the swipelistitem here as well

> ondemand.rst:59
> +
> +For futher guidelines see :doc:`swip list item </components/swipelistitem>`.

swip -> swipe

REPOSITORY
  R985 KDE Human Interface Guidelines

BRANCH
  swipe

REVISION DETAIL
  https://phabricator.kde.org/D12091

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