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> Bell.qml:53
> +    }
> +    Row {
> +        Kirigami.FormData.label: i18nc("Defines if the system will use a 
> sound system bell", "Audible Bell:")

Redo the layout do be more like this:

  Audible bell: [] Enable
                [] Custom sound file: [        ]

> Bell.qml:54
> +    Row {
> +        Kirigami.FormData.label: i18nc("Defines if the system will use a 
> sound system bell", "Audible Bell:")
> +

Remove this `Kirigami.FormData.label`; the checkbox above already has the same 
label

> Bell.qml:144
> +        Kirigami.FormData.label: i18nc("Notification Bells", "Notification:")
> +        text: i18n("Bell when a gesture is used to toggle an accessibility 
> feature")
> +

This isn't a grammatically correct sentence ("bell" is inappropriately used as 
a verb).

How about: "Trigger when an accessibility feature is activated with a gesture"

> main.qml:56
> +    RowLayout {
> +        anchors.margins: Kirigami.Units.largeSpacing
> +

This also needs a height set so that it fills the full height available in the 
KCM. probably `anchors.fill: parent` would be appropriate

REPOSITORY
  R119 Plasma Desktop

REVISION DETAIL
  https://phabricator.kde.org/D25375

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