fre, 2002-09-27 kl. 14:26 skrev Ford, Mike [LSS]:

> I think the page needs a drastic proof-read and grammar check -- I have trouble 
>understanding what some of it is even trying to say.  And I haven't a clue what 
>"ASSAY TO INTEGRATE MANAGEMENT" is supposed to mean!

> It looks like a nice product, but I wouldn't even evaluate it after looking at this 
>because I'd be worried about having to spend too much time trying to decipher it's 
>output.

Beheading gnats:

1:

"its" (genitive) does *not* have an apostrophe.

"it's a nice day" - right;
"it's output" - wrong.

2: Please keep your line length to below 76 characters.

Best,

Tony

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