I think a simpler crop might be more effective. Just take away the whole of the right hand side from one of the vertical lines goes through chip-lady's reflection, but leaving the man's hands fully in the frame. That would leave her somewhere around an intersection of thirds and strengthen the diagonal between her and the lady with the baby.
B > On 9 Jul 2015, at 05:10, ann sanfedele <[email protected]> wrote: > > You have such a great eye... always like your stuff... but for me there is a > bit _too much_ going on.. > The expression on that woman's face with the one fry in her hand is the focal > point for me, juxtaposed too with the few faces in front of her most closely. > If it had been mine I'd crop left and right and trimmed the OTF line across > the top off to bring her in to more prominence... That's me being nit-picky, > though :-) > > ann > >> On 7/8/2015 2:10 AM, Marco Alpert wrote: >> http://www.alpert.com/marco/photo15/peso4.html >> >> Comments, as always, welcomed. >> >> -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
