Bulent Celasun wrote:
A macro under artificial light (Ricoh GXR A12 module, 50mm f/2.5). https://celasun.wordpress.com/2015/02/04/adsiz/ While trying to construct a small home studio for better macros...
I love the composition (though it may be slightly improved if the leaf in the lower left didn't have it's tip cropped off.
I nearly love the lighting, but in some ways it seems just a bit flat, not really showing texture in the leaves.
All in all it's a wonderful shot, but it makes me feel like it could be wonderfuller. Just for fun, try a horizontal crop, at 2x3, off the bottom, so that you lose most of the leaves in the background that seem kind of dark and flat.
Larry
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