I like the positioning from left to right... that is, leaving more sky
to the left - maybe Igor is saying a bit more sky under the swans would
be better - and if that is what he meant , I agree...
I care less about sharpness than geometry in this kind of grab shot...
lucky to ahve gotten anything at all
ann
On 11/18/2014 14:35, Jack Davis wrote:
Thanks, Igor.
The swans were, how do I say it, extremely high. Due to the distance, I'm not
in the least unhappy with the lack of detail.
I'd appreciate it if you would please go over your crop remarks again.(?)
Jack
----- Original Message -----
From: "Igor PDML-StR" <[email protected]>
To: "PDML" <[email protected]>
Sent: Tuesday, November 18, 2014 10:22:24 AM
Subject: Re: Peso-Swans
Jack, I like the how the wings are lit.
Is this a drastic crop? -- I don't know if it is due to the optics or
because the camera was handheld (not fast enough shutter speed?), but as
you said, it is not very sharp.
Also, I would see if it work better with a bit more in the vertical
direction (at the top and especially at the bottom). From the aspect
ratio, I conclude that it was definitely cropped vertically, - but maybe
you didn't have enough on both sides...
Best,
Igor
Jack Davis Tue, 18 Nov 2014 03:29:28 -0800 wrote:
Visited another area wildlife preserve. My only sort of keeper is this
swan flight. Out of range for any real detail, but the sun's position
lit up their wings and the "V" is well formed.
Humble offering!
Comments welcome.
Jack
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