I prefer the first version. I liked the stark lines and rendition, with the foreground rails a nice contrast. (Background silhouettes vs. foreground detail.) This one including the tree seems cluttered to me - the tree fights with the barn for attention and masks the barn from view. The tiny bits of color that this one adds do not IMHO add enough to offset what you have lost in the composition.
stan On Jan 16, 2014, at 6:09 PM, Ann Sanfedele <[email protected]> wrote: > Much more interesting photo to me, for sure. > > The first one had a rather artificial feel to it... > > ann > > On 1/16/2014 16:10, Ken Waller wrote: >> Pulled out some color from a mostly B+W capture. >> >> http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=17655038 >> >> K3, 28-80 smc F 400 ISO >> >> Your thoughts appreciated >> >> >> Kenneth Waller >> http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/kennethwaller >> > -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
