Thank you, Paul, for the kind words!

I do like the shot as a whole. The overall impression is nice, and it's nice to know that someone with a discerning eye appreciates the light and composition. It's certainly reaffirming, and makes me believe I'm at least on the right path with this one.

As I see it, the halo is fixable ... and it will be fixed in the long run. I can't do much about the focus now, and I'm OK with that. But, given your input, I know the image is worthy of the effort to fix the halo. And in all honesty, whenever I post a PESO, 90% of the time it's to find out what can be done to improve a shot that I'm already somewhat proud of.

Given your input, and P.J.'s critique, I now know that the shot is well worth the effort it's going to take to plug the technical holes.

All in all, a guy has to feel pretty good about that. There's something to be said for having taken a nice picture with a few fixable flaws.

Thanks again!

-- Walt

On 10/6/2010 7:12 PM, paul stenquist wrote:
Very nice. Excellent composition and dramatic light. Technical quibbles are 
inconsequential when the overall impression is this good.
Paul
On Oct 6, 2010, at 5:55 PM, P. J. Alling wrote:

There's still a bit of halo around the bird, and focus seems to be on the far 
wing.  Still in all it's a very nice attempt.

On 10/6/2010 2:06 PM, Walter Gilbert wrote:
After posting the question regarding what images to keep vs. which to delete, I 
thought I'd post this one ... the first in-flight capture of a bird I ever 
took.  This is the one that got me hooked on it, and what made me immediately 
fall in love with my K-x.  It remains one of my favorites among all the photos 
I've taken.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/walt_gilbert/5057232937/
K-x, DA L 50-200mm, f/5.6, ISO 800, 1/6000, Shutter Priority

Unfortunately, when I resized it it stripped all the XIF data out, but 
fortunately (thanks to Picasa) I still have the original file.

Comments, critiques, and hagiographic commentary are, of course, welcome.

-- Walt





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