> Nice pose. Well framed. I find the background too busy. You need something cleaner and less disruptive. I also think the light is too high and hard. You're getting somewhat unpleasant shadows in the eye sockets, below the cheek bones, and on the neck.
Paul > > DJB> On Sat, Mar 13, 2010 at 4:22 PM, Sasha Sobol <[email protected]> wrote: >>> http://www.flickr.com/photos/sobol/4430214904/ >>> >>> I am not sure about this one, need your comments and critique. >>> >>> --Sasha >>> >>> -- >>> PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List >>> [email protected] >>> http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net >>> to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and >>> follow the directions. >>> > > > > DJB> -- > DJB> Documenting Life in Rural Ontario. > DJB> www.caughtinmotion.com > DJB> http://brooksinthecountry.blogspot.com/ > DJB> York Region, Ontario, Canada > > > > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow > the directions. -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
