On Sat, Jan 30, 2010 at 9:20 AM, Cotty <[email protected]> wrote: > This email directed at all PDML Annual 2008-2009 book contributors. > > As a part of my preparations to try and get a TV documentary > commissioned about the PDML
I love the pacing and audio and video work, I really hope it finds its way onto the air. One critique: those 12 minutes are sort of trying to be about two things at once: the people gathering at GFM, and also about the book production. The segue back and forth could be smoother. I think there's an underlying connecting thread that wants to be highlighted, but I'm not sure you've quite got your grasp on it. -T -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.

