On Sat, Jan 30, 2010 at 9:20 AM, Cotty <[email protected]> wrote:
> This email directed at all PDML Annual 2008-2009 book contributors.
>
> As a part of my preparations to try and get a TV documentary
> commissioned about the PDML

I love the pacing and audio and video work, I really hope it finds its
way onto the air.

One critique: those 12 minutes are sort of trying to be about two
things at once: the people gathering at GFM, and also about the book
production.  The segue back and forth could be smoother.  I think
there's an underlying connecting thread that wants to be highlighted,
but I'm not sure you've quite got your grasp on it.  -T

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