Nice attempt at a good idea, Ed. A couple suggestions. Since the leaves are such dominant elements, I feel they both should be in focus. Looks as though you must have some cropping room and if you're able, I suggest you crop a little off the right side and add it to the left. I'd place the separation between the leaves about center frame.
Jack --- On Wed, 3/11/09, Ed Keeney <[email protected]> wrote: > From: Ed Keeney <[email protected]> > Subject: PESO: Leaf 1 > To: "Pentax-Discuss Mail List" <[email protected]> > Date: Wednesday, March 11, 2009, 9:09 AM > Been trying out the FA-50. I'm find shooting with a > prime lens again > (it's been attached since I received it) is > interesting. I forgot how > much thought process should really go into composition, > etc. > > > http://ewkphoto.blogspot.com/2009/03/2009-02-23.html > > > Comments and critiques welcome! > > -- > Thanks! > Ed > > http://ewkphoto.blogspot.com/ > http://picasaweb.google.com/ewkphoto > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link > directly above and follow the directions. -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
