Looks fine as is except my eye keeps getting distracted by the 3 tall poles 
in the back. Perhaps a horizontal crop just below the top of the fence.
Obviously, the graduated steps leading up to the stretcher make this one.
Good eye.

Kenneth Waller
http://www.tinyurl.com/272u2f

----- Original Message ----- 
From: "Bruce Walker" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
Subject: PESO: Benched [advice solicited]


>I caught what I think has the makings of a street photo.  But my inner
> critic says, "too much clutter--isolate subject more (somehow)", or
> "it's too tilted", or any number of other issues.  I've already done a
> minor crop and I've played with the b&w conversion until I'm going
> cross-eyed.
>
> So I could use some advice: what would you do next with this?  If you
> think, "erase it", then please say so. :-)
>
> http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3072/2582652248_fc7511edd5_o.jpg
>
> Thanks!
>
> -bmw


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